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Re: It's Not You, but It Isn't Me, Either
Hey! I kind Of Like This Poem But Then On The Same Hand I Dont Like ThiS pOEm. I could not keep up with the poem. Though rhyming is not ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: your skin gets thinner the longer it's there
Hey! Truly An Amazing Piece I Say. Though The Title Seemed A Little Awkward but are you sure this is a poem? I mean most of the lines are too ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: The Girl Who Was Lost in the Stars *Before the Beginning*
Hey! Ah May Zing WORK! Keep Going and you can do alot. I Did not read the story completely but it seemed to me as if it is really amazing. ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: Leech
To be honestly speaking i really did not like this poem. Dont feel bad but everyone has their own choices . I Believe every writer or poet have their own ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Train Ride to Nowhere
Hey... Great theme to write a poem on. Great work. It is short but sweet. There are a few mistakes which i will be telling you. In these lines Slipping ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Locked Up In This Cage Called My Life
Hey,,,, As usual I congratulate people for their work so here it goes. First Of all hats off to your amazing performance .. Although i felt the punctuation and grammar ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Invisible.
Hey.... Great work i must say.This poem is short but conveys an amazing meaning. Although the scheme and rhyming of the poem were not proper. If you are writing a ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Bloom
Great poem for a 15 year old. AlthougH i believe that 15 year old have more capability than what you have written. I am not saying the poem is bad ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Mechanical Jellyfish: A Year in Dreams (August)
Hey! First of all hats off to your amazing performance. I must say its really great. The grammar and all is kind of okay only but why don't you go ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Semi-conscious Reasoning (10. To Tomorrow) (End)
Hey! :D First of all hats off to your amazing performance. I must say its really great. The grammar and all is kind of okay only but why don't you ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Risk ch 6
Hey , First of all tremendous performance. I really like the way you have come up with the story. Grammar and all is fine although there are some mistakes but ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: HOPE
Woah Woah Woah Hold On There, This is not the format of writing a poem. You need to divide your poem into stanza's, The poem and all you have written ...
Jun 29, 2013 -
Re: Above the Clouds
First of all! Gr8 efforts. :D While writing a poem you need to keep a few things in mind. Its not necessary to rhyme poems but if you do it ...
Jun 29, 2013 -
Re: It's Strange
Woa Woa Wait a minute.. Your Second Line Does Not Seems Good. It looks disgusting. But poetry does not stop you from doing that . In poetry you have the ...
Jun 11, 2013 -
Re: I am 21
Hmm.. I Feel it to be simple and original but what exactly the thing is that this cannot be called a poem. A poem may or may not be a ...
Jun 11, 2013