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A great piece I must say. I wish to read the rest later on. I like the way you began writing. I wish I could help you discover small errors ...

Hey there! RBT here to review your piece. What I read just sounded extremely brilliant and all put together perfectly. I loved the way you started. The flow went on ...

Hey there! RBT here to review this poem you have written. Applause to your tremendous work there! I can make out the concept you have chosen here and put it ...

Brilliant! That's what I can comment at the first sight I loved these lines "Come closer but keep your hand a far. Get away with retribution unfair," I think these ...

Howdy! Hows it going? Great work! As always first comes appreciating whatever efforts you have put in there. It gives a great boost and develops your confidence in the first ...

Hey there! A beautiful piece you have written there. Good Job. First , let me start with the positives as it always gives the good impressions. What I really loved ...

Woah! Woah! A great imagery you have used to describe this wonderful piece of yours! I appreciate the efforts you have put in here or maybe you didn't and writing ...

Hey there! I am here to review this amazing piece you have written. A touching one I must say. I liked the way you described the whole thing. It formed ...

Woah! Woah! Such a beautiful poem. Really! Not buttering! Just two stanza's but contains so much more. I found no imperfections. You have used great words to describe what you ...

Good evening! How are you? So, I am here to review this short poem you have written. First of all, I appreciate your work. The first stanza was great but ...

Howdy! RBT here to review this amazing piece you have written. It has been alot of time since I have written a review here so it might not be a ...

Hmmmm.... Quite interesting I must say. Sort of hard to understand. Nice words used there. I appreciate the effort you have put in this poem. I see that every second ...

Woah! Great poem there you have written. You started off really well. The first 3 para's were quite well written but I sort of lost the thing while coming towards ...

Hey! Great efforts you have put in here. I can see a pattern that is I really want some ice cream On this hot and sunny day I really want ...

Hats off. Great write. Although, A few sentences I felt needed a bit change "My namesake has gone, I had nothing left." ---------- this once ivory tower feels more like ...