Hiya..
So what I really absolutely loved about the piece was the complete change of feeling from the beginning to end. The description of the accident was so precise that it gave me goose bumps. But then as it progressed, the idea of how the narrator's perspective on his life changes (that's how I interpreted the whole thing, one incident changing things and life for them). And I completely love the ending.
My favorite line was the last line- heavy, comforting, alive.
It just gave me a sense of calm and freedom somehow.
9/10
Good work!
Harshita
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