radiatelove23

wow, i really liked your was good and really thought out:) except i do think it should be 'right' instead of 'alright' overall i did enjoy it. while reading through ...

this poem was very sweet and i liked it.expressing how you felt in sucha short poem really showed the emotions.the last two lines however were out of place.maybe you could ...

your poem is extremely wonderful and i loved every single line:) how it explains how you feel and what you need but in the end it's not what you thought ...

you have a great poem going on and all i can do is continue reading it..i had a little hard time following at first maybe due to the chosen words ...

nice poem,i like it.what was written is true:) when you dont have something you want it but if you have it you dont and people dont realize it. i reread ...

it's a very nice and true poem,i liked the meaning/message of it but for the first stanza you could use different words to describe love. something emotional or strong. other ...

what a nice poem,i really liked it:) the way you expressed everything that is in a heart,everything we convey in it. once i started reading i couldn't stop and once ...

*i mean first paragraph starting with second line

very nice poem you have going here.the choice of words are very creative, the main point is very clear.i liked it and adding colors to it all made it seem ...

can i just say how good this is!!you did an amazing job! some words needed capatalization but over all it was great! loved the writing and choice of words i'll ...

hi there,i just went over your poem quickly and then reread it and let me say you've got a nice,strong and vivid poem going on.not much like these out there.the ...

i really liked and enjoyed your poem! along with the choice of words you used. i liked how not all the verses rhymed and how you were able to get ...

i liked the needless of punctuation, where you were able to just let go and write whats on the mind,so i say good job:)

hey there, i reviewed your poem and it really grabbed my attention. i loved the flow and rhythm you had going.the use of words and meaning towards it. amazing job!

hi there,just want to say you did a wonderful job on this narrative poem. the way it's telling her what to do as you're in anticipation to read the next ...