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Re: Prologue.
Hello! racket here to review this short story! Well, I really enjoyed the vocabulary and imagery used here! It's excellent, and really does make you feel as if you were ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Cat's Meow
XD Oh, I love this! You got the cat-attitude down perfectly! Honestly, there's nothing much to improve here, except for the few spelling errors here and there. I really like ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Handwriting
Hey, there, friend! racket here to review your handwriting. O.o XD Okay, well, this is good, only a few things to tweak. First, just a technical thing; you say in ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: The Garden
Hello! racket here to review! Well, this is cool! It's a little difficult to grasp the meaning of, but I think I get it. The garden is the peace from ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Destiny In a Cup of Tea
Wow. This is really well done. I'm very impressed with your keeping this poem rhyming and making sense simultaneously. Well done! That's really hard. Okay, so I love how this ...
Sep 1, 2015 -
Re: A Day in September
Hello there, Dess, racket here to review your short. Dang. This is really, really good. It took me way, way too long to figure out this was about 9/11. Mark ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: The Procrastinator
XD This is awesome! I especially love the ending; it's ingenious! Okay, sorry, starting over. Hi, racket here to review this awesome short! Really, don't worry about writing badly; this ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: Shipwrecked
Hello, Annie, racket here to review this short story! Okay, well, firstly, I want you to know that this is a very good short story idea! I like how you ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: Grey Mystery
Hello, there, RandomColumns! racket here to review this poem! Well, firstly, I like how short this is, especially with how much meaning it carries at the same time. I can't ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: Falling Father
Hello there, plathonstone, racket here to review this short! Dang, this is very, very well written. Great job. Goodness, this almost made me cry. There's only a few spots I ...
Jul 4, 2015 -
Re: Out of the Sea
Hello, there, racket here to review your poem. Dang, this is really, really good. I doubt I could ever write this well. Good job. So, I really like how you ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: I want that state of mind again...
Hmm, this is interesting. Hi, there, SINGHAM, (XD) racket here to review this poem! Okay, so I like this. I think the answer to your question would be that when ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: The Tree People (Working Title) Chapter 1
Agh, it's Rhys! At the end, sorry. The man..... >.< Sorry. Hello, there, racket here to review your chapter! Okay, so, wow, that was a lot. Well, I really liked ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: Random Thoughts of Mine
Okay, well, hi! racket here to review this interesting nonfiction argument. So, first off, I just want to explain that here at YWS, we mostly do fiction things, stories, songs, ...
Jul 2, 2015 -
Re: Regret But No Repentence
Hello, there, racket here to review this short! Well, I really liked this, though it was a bit confusing in some parts. Not what you actually wrote, but we're missing ...
Jul 1, 2015