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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Late Bloom: Chapter One

    Hey there Cheeta! I currently do not have access to a computer and I hate reviewing on my phone, so I'm just going to suggest a few things. First off, ...

    Aug 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chasing the Wind

    Hello acm! racket here to review your poem! Wow. This is one heck of an interesting piece of poetry. I really like your metaphors; they're o clear and interesting and ...

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: {Title}

    Hello Questio! racket here to review your poem! Gosh, I love this! It made me laugh. XD Good job! I like how all your lines are ironic and beat themselves ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Does He Know?

    Hello, herby! racket here to review this for Review Day. Aaaaand you're making me curious now. *raises eyebrow* We will have to talk about this... Well, I really like this! ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Paper Planes (Ch2)

    Hello again, Jupiter! It is obviously racket, who is reviewing your chapter. THEY SCOFF AT THE GUY? WHHHHAAAATTT???!!!! They were left stranded in a strange town, the only other person ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Close the Doors.

    Hello, Halfblood! racket here to review this short story! Well, I haven't read the canon parts of this story, but I do really like the concept, and your characters seem ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Late Bloom- Prologue

    Hello, Halfblood! racket here to review your prologue! Well, this is an interesting society you've developed, though it feels a bit forced, especially at the beginning. Your explanation of World ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Love, Not my Life

    Hello Cello! (Oh gosh that rhymed...) racket here to review your poem! I really like this! I can totally relate, both with people and book characters, so good job! Your ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Paper Planes (Ch1)

    Hello, Jupiter! racket here to review your chapter! Oooh, okay, so this is interesting. I like the kind of creepy, mysterious atmosphere you've projected and I can really get a ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: Inner Battle

    Hello again, Jupiter! racket here to review another poem. Well. This is deep... and well done in its deepness! I like your narrator's interjecting thoughts and phrasing and ideas and ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Nothing

    Hello, Jupiter! racket here to review your poem! (I think I'll probably work my way through all your poems for review day, so be forewarned. ;)) Well, I like this! ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Boy! I wish I had fins

    Hello, Becky! racket here to review your poem. XD Well. XD I like this! Your point of view is kind of funny, at least from my perspective. So completely awed ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: 5 Essential Souls (That first chapter)

    XD XD Well. O.O Okay then. That is quite a lot of shouting... XD Hello, Double! racket here to review your chapter thang... (thanks for making it so short, my ...

    Sep 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tin-Man

    Hello, Atsmai! racket here to review your poem! I really, really enjoyed these metaphors. They're extremely relatable and, yeah, just great. Good job! There's only a few things I would ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: man

    Hello, Stegosaurus! racket here to review your poem! Okay, well, I really, really liked this. It's very well done and wonderfully phrased. The metaphors are admirable and, yeah, this is ...

    Sep 22, 2015


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein