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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Late Bloom: Chapter One

    Hey there Cheeta! I currently do not have access to a computer and I hate reviewing on my phone, so I'm just going to suggest a few things. First off, ...

    Aug 2, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Chasing the Wind

    Hello acm! racket here to review your poem! Wow. This is one heck of an interesting piece of poetry. I really like your metaphors; they're o clear and interesting and ...

    Sep 29, 2015

  • Poetry » Other, Humor
    Re: {Title}

    Hello Questio! racket here to review your poem! Gosh, I love this! It made me laugh. XD Good job! I like how all your lines are ironic and beat themselves ...

    Sep 29, 2015

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Does He Know?

    Hello, herby! racket here to review this for Review Day. Aaaaand you're making me curious now. *raises eyebrow* We will have to talk about this... Well, I really like this! ...

    Sep 27, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Paper Planes (Ch2)

    Hello again, Jupiter! It is obviously racket, who is reviewing your chapter. THEY SCOFF AT THE GUY? WHHHHAAAATTT???!!!! They were left stranded in a strange town, the only other person ...

    Sep 27, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Close the Doors.

    Hello, Halfblood! racket here to review this short story! Well, I haven't read the canon parts of this story, but I do really like the concept, and your characters seem ...

    Sep 27, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other
    Re: Late Bloom- Prologue

    Hello, Halfblood! racket here to review your prologue! Well, this is an interesting society you've developed, though it feels a bit forced, especially at the beginning. Your explanation of World ...

    Sep 27, 2015

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: My Love, Not my Life

    Hello Cello! (Oh gosh that rhymed...) racket here to review your poem! I really like this! I can totally relate, both with people and book characters, so good job! Your ...

    Sep 27, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Paper Planes (Ch1)

    Hello, Jupiter! racket here to review your chapter! Oooh, okay, so this is interesting. I like the kind of creepy, mysterious atmosphere you've projected and I can really get a ...

    Sep 27, 2015

  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic
    Re: Inner Battle

    Hello again, Jupiter! racket here to review another poem. Well. This is deep... and well done in its deepness! I like your narrator's interjecting thoughts and phrasing and ideas and ...

    Sep 27, 2015

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Nothing

    Hello, Jupiter! racket here to review your poem! (I think I'll probably work my way through all your poems for review day, so be forewarned. ;)) Well, I like this! ...

    Sep 27, 2015

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic
    Re: Boy! I wish I had fins

    Hello, Becky! racket here to review your poem. XD Well. XD I like this! Your point of view is kind of funny, at least from my perspective. So completely awed ...

    Sep 26, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: 5 Essential Souls (That first chapter)

    XD XD Well. O.O Okay then. That is quite a lot of shouting... XD Hello, Double! racket here to review your chapter thang... (thanks for making it so short, my ...

    Sep 24, 2015

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Tin-Man

    Hello, Atsmai! racket here to review your poem! I really, really enjoyed these metaphors. They're extremely relatable and, yeah, just great. Good job! There's only a few things I would ...

    Sep 22, 2015

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: man

    Hello, Stegosaurus! racket here to review your poem! Okay, well, I really, really liked this. It's very well done and wonderfully phrased. The metaphors are admirable and, yeah, this is ...

    Sep 21, 2015


Did you ever hear the Tragedy of Darth Plagueis the wise? I thought not. It's not a story the Jedi would tell you. It's a Sith legend. Darth Plagueis was a Dark Lord of the Sith, so powerful and so wise he could use the Force to influence the midichlorians to create life... He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying. The dark side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural. He became so powerful... the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which eventually, of course, he did. Unfortunately, he taught his apprentice everything he knew, then his apprentice killed him in his sleep. It's ironic he could save others from death, but not himself.
— RazorSharpPencil