Young Writers Society

Hey there Cheeta! I currently do not have access to a computer and I hate reviewing on my phone, so I'm just going to suggest a few things. First off, ...

Hello acm! racket here to review your poem! Wow. This is one heck of an interesting piece of poetry. I really like your metaphors; they're o clear and interesting and ...

Hello Questio! racket here to review your poem! Gosh, I love this! It made me laugh. XD Good job! I like how all your lines are ironic and beat themselves ...

Hello, herby! racket here to review this for Review Day. Aaaaand you're making me curious now. *raises eyebrow* We will have to talk about this... Well, I really like this! ...

Hello again, Jupiter! It is obviously racket, who is reviewing your chapter. THEY SCOFF AT THE GUY? WHHHHAAAATTT???!!!! They were left stranded in a strange town, the only other person ...

Hello, Halfblood! racket here to review this short story! Well, I haven't read the canon parts of this story, but I do really like the concept, and your characters seem ...

Hello, Halfblood! racket here to review your prologue! Well, this is an interesting society you've developed, though it feels a bit forced, especially at the beginning. Your explanation of World ...

Hello Cello! (Oh gosh that rhymed...) racket here to review your poem! I really like this! I can totally relate, both with people and book characters, so good job! Your ...

Hello, Jupiter! racket here to review your chapter! Oooh, okay, so this is interesting. I like the kind of creepy, mysterious atmosphere you've projected and I can really get a ...

Hello again, Jupiter! racket here to review another poem. Well. This is deep... and well done in its deepness! I like your narrator's interjecting thoughts and phrasing and ideas and ...

Hello, Jupiter! racket here to review your poem! (I think I'll probably work my way through all your poems for review day, so be forewarned. ;)) Well, I like this! ...

Hello, Becky! racket here to review your poem. XD Well. XD I like this! Your point of view is kind of funny, at least from my perspective. So completely awed ...

XD XD Well. O.O Okay then. That is quite a lot of shouting... XD Hello, Double! racket here to review your chapter thang... (thanks for making it so short, my ...

Hello, Atsmai! racket here to review your poem! I really, really enjoyed these metaphors. They're extremely relatable and, yeah, just great. Good job! There's only a few things I would ...

Hello, Stegosaurus! racket here to review your poem! Okay, well, I really, really liked this. It's very well done and wonderfully phrased. The metaphors are admirable and, yeah, this is ...