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Re: Dramatic procrastination
I loved this poem. It described my life. But here's the thing, I didn't like the way the procrastination was so vague. If you want it to be dramatic, make ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Do you remember?
Hey! Rachelle here. This poem was really cool. I enjoyed reading it. There wasn't much to correct in this poem though. This review is just going to be a few ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: 9/2/05
Hey. Rachelle here. If this was a regular poem, I would have a lot of complaints. But since it's a song, things get a little more interesting. I enjoyed the ...
Mar 15, 2015 -
Re: Two Voice Poem
Wow. I really loved this. I love studying the Holocaust. I really liked this but maybe for the same lines you could just put it once (unless you need to ...
Mar 14, 2015 -
Re: King of Doom
Hey there. Well you completed your task! You followed the rules set before you. There are a few suggestions for you. I will leave the first and last words of ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Koo The Story
Hey! Rachelle here. Quick note about my reviews: I don't do fluff. I am giving you a REAL review. I don't say anything without a purpose and I don't mean ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Somewhere in a dream..
Hey, I thought you would like a review. First off, I liked your poem. It was interesting and I was immediately hooked. But here's the thing. I didn't... connect with ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Fisher King in Hiding
This is a very interesting poem! I really liked it. I liked the style that you wrote it in and the topic as well. You don't see poems like this ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Cipa 1
This is a nice story. But I would like a little more background. Is there another part to this? One that I missed? Also, what is CIPA? I've got an ...
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: Even when I am dead
Hey! I thought you might like a review. I really liked this. It was very sweet. I noticed a pattern of syllables but not a rhyming scheme. That isn't bad. ...
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: Shades of White part 1
I'm just going in order of how it pops into my head, so bear with me. This was quite interesting. It was an enjoyable story. I feel like the beginning ...
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: Are you alive?
Hi! Want a review? :) I liked this. Maybe you should write more of it though. I wanted a place in the poem that said "then you aren't alive". I ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: The Path
I thought maybe you would like a review. This was certainly well written. I have nothing to complain about, really. But for my personal taste there were a few "sticky ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: Black Plague
Hey! I figured that you could use a review. I love the way you wrote this! Such feeling! I just have a few questions and suggestions. First of all, in ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: I Know That I Don't Know Everything.
Hey. This poem is very... interesting. I can't help but wonder, do you really feel this way towards your mother? I admit you put a lot of feeling into this ...
Mar 4, 2015
