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rachellecarter

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Dramatic procrastination

    I loved this poem. It described my life. But here's the thing, I didn't like the way the procrastination was so vague. If you want it to be dramatic, make ...

    Mar 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Do you remember?

    Hey! Rachelle here. This poem was really cool. I enjoyed reading it. There wasn't much to correct in this poem though. This review is just going to be a few ...

    Mar 16, 2015
  • Lyrics » Narrative, General Re: 9/2/05

    Hey. Rachelle here. If this was a regular poem, I would have a lot of complaints. But since it's a song, things get a little more interesting. I enjoyed the ...

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Historical Fiction Re: Two Voice Poem

    Wow. I really loved this. I love studying the Holocaust. I really liked this but maybe for the same lines you could just put it once (unless you need to ...

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: King of Doom

    Hey there. Well you completed your task! You followed the rules set before you. There are a few suggestions for you. I will leave the first and last words of ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Koo The Story

    Hey! Rachelle here. Quick note about my reviews: I don't do fluff. I am giving you a REAL review. I don't say anything without a purpose and I don't mean ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Somewhere in a dream..

    Hey, I thought you would like a review. First off, I liked your poem. It was interesting and I was immediately hooked. But here's the thing. I didn't... connect with ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature Re: Fisher King in Hiding

    This is a very interesting poem! I really liked it. I liked the style that you wrote it in and the topic as well. You don't see poems like this ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Cipa 1

    This is a nice story. But I would like a little more background. Is there another part to this? One that I missed? Also, what is CIPA? I've got an ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Even when I am dead

    Hey! I thought you might like a review. I really liked this. It was very sweet. I noticed a pattern of syllables but not a rhyming scheme. That isn't bad. ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Shades of White part 1

    I'm just going in order of how it pops into my head, so bear with me. This was quite interesting. It was an enjoyable story. I feel like the beginning ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Are you alive?

    Hi! Want a review? :) I liked this. Maybe you should write more of it though. I wanted a place in the poem that said "then you aren't alive". I ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Path

    I thought maybe you would like a review. This was certainly well written. I have nothing to complain about, really. But for my personal taste there were a few "sticky ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Script » General, General Re: Black Plague

    Hey! I figured that you could use a review. I love the way you wrote this! Such feeling! I just have a few questions and suggestions. First of all, in ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Know That I Don't Know Everything.

    Hey. This poem is very... interesting. I can't help but wonder, do you really feel this way towards your mother? I admit you put a lot of feeling into this ...

    Mar 4, 2015


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