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This is really good! I only have semantic tips, except one thematic thing. The thematic thing is that I'd like the question part at the end to be longer or ...

I liked the poem, but like all works, reviewing it isn't a matter of what should and shouldn't be, so I can't really tell you what you should change to ...

First let me say that this was really well written, and kept my attention from beginning to end, so congratulations on writing such an impressive piece! In any case, there's ...

so I'm not usually a fan of fan fiction, but is has been bugging me that even in the later books, the other districts besides 11, 12, and 13 are ...

this poem has a lot of feeling in it, but what I liked most was the alliteration, and the way it sounds when read out loud. it's very smooth and ...

first I have to congratulate you on your vocabulary, as words like, "impassable" and "insurmountable" really gave this piece a fresh and beautiful feel. you spend a lot of time ...

Hi, it's me Psudiname, here to give a review. to begin, I think you have potential as a writer, and you certainly came to the right place to fulfill it. ...

Hi, It's me again, here to do another review. First off I'd like to say that the issues with this work are less about your writing, and more about the ...

so I have to admit, you did a thing that I've wanted to see done for years. the closest I've ever come to this form of media is Scott Pilgrim, ...

I really liked this, mainly because it was rich in vocabulary and imagery. I felt like I was a better writer after reading this, simply because of how good of ...

I don't have much constructive criticism because I thought this was really pretty good, so I'll just go ahead and tell you what I liked about it so you know ...

Hi Cadi! I'm here as promised for the comprehensive review of both parts of your short story. First I suppose I'll start with the things you did well, then go ...

I liked this because of the feel it had, and the choice of words that you employed. the imagery and metaphors were vivid and expressive, if a little confusing. my ...

first off I'd like to say why I enjoyed this piece. like all good poetry, it's not something anecdotal and easy to understand, but has to be picked apart for ...

to begin with, I noticed right away what your biggest strength was, and conversly your biggest weakness. you are very good at diction and seem to posess a rich vocabulary, ...