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Hey, priceofwords here :) I loved this poem, it had no rhyme scheme which almost gave it a mind of its own. The imagery you used helped me empathise so ...

Hi, priceofwords here :) I can see that this is probably personal for you, but even so I think you did a beautiful job of it. I love the way ...

Hello, Wow, I loved this poem! Your rhyming was playful yet couldn't be more perfect. I agree with the first reviewer that the lullaby is quite sinister, yet it is ...

Hi, priceofwords here :) I loved the idea of this poem, the fact that it concerned the world ending and everything we hold most dear to us being ripped away. ...

Hello, priceofwords here :) Your poem is amazing and I love it. I especially loved your reference to the story of david and goliath, which adds so much more depth ...

Hi, priceofwords here! I liked your poem in that it was simple yet quite individual. The rhyming was also awesome, you definitely got that spot on! However I wasn't quite ...

Hi , I really liked this poem, as it was short, sweet and very relatable. I particularly like the line, 'You picked me up Monday and gave me a ride ...

Hi, I loved the idea behind this poem, and how the aftermath of the war was presented within it was quite melancholic, spooky, which I thought was awesome. I particularly ...

Hi, I really liked this story. As TheGirlNextDoor said, it could have been a little more emotional during the running scene, but apart from that it was perfect. You really ...

I cannot explain how much I love this song. It's so beautiful, and I can sense that the words were specially crafted which great skill. The line, 'to dissolve from ...

Hi, Okay, so I love the idea of this story. Not many people write about a fantasyland and therefore I found this piece to be very original and pretty 'funky' ...

Hi, This poem has great rhythm, I love it! I can't quite work out what it's about, but that's one of the things I really like about it, that people ...

Hi, First of all, wow, this was such a beautiful poem! I'm not a Christian myself but this really brought the true meaning of Christmas to the fore for me. ...

Hi, I thought this poem was very expressive in terms of the words that you used, and I really got the feelings of negativity you were trying to portray. However, ...

I love the constant rhythm that you keep in this poem, it makes it really easy to read and it flows really well. As far as I can see you ...