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Hey burninhell, So this was awesome, just like all the other parts but with some kick butt action as well. I loved the pacing of it, all the characters are ...

Hi, priceofwords here! This work came across quite bittersweet, but was a joy to read all the same. Your rhythm is spot on, the topic covered well - many love ...

Hey burninhell, Loved this part of your story as much as I loved the first part, although now I have a slight craving for doughnuts. The group dynamics were awesome, ...

Hey burninhell, Loving this work!!! So much mystery and things to intrigue! I have so many questions about this story already, though I know they'll be answered soon. I particularly ...

Hey, priceofwords here, Wow. Just wow. This is one of the most intelligently written pieces I've read on here. To portray cigarette smoking in this way... it's a way I ...

Hello, priceofwords here :) First of all, welcome to YWS ;) Secondly, I love the imagery you've used in this poem, for it makes it very vivid and easy to ...

Hey, burninhell, priceofwords here ;) This is such a cool idea for a novel! It reminded me a little of Inception, but without the confusing multiple layers of dreams and ...

Hello, priceofwords here! This was such a sweet poem! A very sad story, but with a lot of meaning behind it. The first stanza, 'She never found her dream job, ...

Hello, priceofwords here! This was a pretty cool poem. I particularly loved your use of repetition of the lines, 'And the sky is dead,' 'The moon's blood red,' as it ...

Hello, priceofwords here! You have really summed up what I love about Haikus in your work here. Simple, yet artfully crafted. All of your words fit together really nicely, creating ...

Hello, priceofwords here! I thought this was a great topic you used for this poem. Very relatable, as I'm sure we've all felt the unwanted speed of life at some ...

Hello, priceofwords here! This was a nice piece, it flowed really well and I appreciated the humorous parts you added in there as well! I particularly liked, 'And know we ...

Hello, priceofwords here ;) I know you're not gonna write it, but I do wish you'd write the rest of the novel out. I really want to read more about ...

Hello, priceofwords here! Wow, I really loved this poem. The amount of detail, and the imagery were just amazing. Your words just seemed to flow together like the ocean itself, ...

Hello, priceofwords here! For your first poem posted online this was great. You did an awesome job with this, so well done! I liked your occasional List of Three you ...