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  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Blank Page and Not Listening

    Hi, firstly I just wanna say that I love this. As someone who gets Writer's Block all the time, you really put into words exactly how it feels and how ...

    Apr 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I Love You Still

    Hi. First off I love this! I can totally feel the pain the main character is going through. I love your writing style, it's very strong and descriptive (like I ...

    Apr 23, 2016
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: My Darling Gone...

    Not here to critique at all. I just wanted to say, this was beautiful. It made me cry a lot, and even though I don't know you or the situation ...

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Untitled

    Hi, so I liked your poem a lot. It was so deep and intriguing and for no other way to put this--not whiny. It has a lot of depth to ...

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Left

    I really love this. It just has so much passion and soul, and I can feel the pain. I also really liked your rhyme scheme---I think it gave the poem ...

    Feb 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Lessons Well-Learned

    So, I really liked this poem because it's short and to the point. That being said, it really makes you think about everything you've mentioned. 1. Ignorance is bliss----how many ...

    Feb 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Letter to the fake high school friends I used to know.

    Wow. I can feel all of the emotion you put into this, and I know that's not easy. It's not easy to stand up and say screw you to people ...

    Feb 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What's

    Hi there! So first off I really loved this poem. It really captures the reader and gets them thinking. I really appreciate that in your poem, you make the reader ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Blue

    Hi, so first off I'm not sure I understand your poem. I think it was amazing imagery and I could really picture every line until I got to the word ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Deceptions

    Hi, firstly I loved this concept. I love the idea of hell being our time on Earth because lets face it, everyone sins. And others' sins hurt us. I think ...

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: I'm gonna make it

    Initially, it was your description that made me want to read this poem and I'm so glad it did! I loved this poem. I think you depicted struggles and times ...

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the crack of a bat

    I thought this was such a cute poem. I loved the imagery and the descriptions of being on a field playing the game. The bug bit arms and the bare ...

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Seasons

    Hi! So for starters I really really enjoyed this poem, and I liked a lot that you compared the seasons to the changes in a person. I think you beautifully ...

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: storms

    Hi, I'm new here but I really really liked your poem for several reasons. Firstly, the poem was filled with so much imagery. I could picture a bigger and darker ...

    Dec 25, 2014


Anxiety is the dizziness of freedom.
— Søren Kierkegaard