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Re: Blank Page and Not Listening
Hi, firstly I just wanna say that I love this. As someone who gets Writer's Block all the time, you really put into words exactly how it feels and how ...
Apr 23, 2016 -
Re: I Love You Still
Hi. First off I love this! I can totally feel the pain the main character is going through. I love your writing style, it's very strong and descriptive (like I ...
Apr 23, 2016 -
Re: My Darling Gone...
Not here to critique at all. I just wanted to say, this was beautiful. It made me cry a lot, and even though I don't know you or the situation ...
Feb 4, 2015 -
Re: Untitled
Hi, so I liked your poem a lot. It was so deep and intriguing and for no other way to put this--not whiny. It has a lot of depth to ...
Feb 4, 2015 -
Re: Left
I really love this. It just has so much passion and soul, and I can feel the pain. I also really liked your rhyme scheme---I think it gave the poem ...
Feb 2, 2015 -
Re: Lessons Well-Learned
So, I really liked this poem because it's short and to the point. That being said, it really makes you think about everything you've mentioned. 1. Ignorance is bliss----how many ...
Feb 2, 2015 -
Re: Letter to the fake high school friends I used to know.
Wow. I can feel all of the emotion you put into this, and I know that's not easy. It's not easy to stand up and say screw you to people ...
Feb 2, 2015 -
Re: What's
Hi there! So first off I really loved this poem. It really captures the reader and gets them thinking. I really appreciate that in your poem, you make the reader ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: Blue
Hi, so first off I'm not sure I understand your poem. I think it was amazing imagery and I could really picture every line until I got to the word ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: Deceptions
Hi, firstly I loved this concept. I love the idea of hell being our time on Earth because lets face it, everyone sins. And others' sins hurt us. I think ...
Dec 25, 2014 -
Re: I'm gonna make it
Initially, it was your description that made me want to read this poem and I'm so glad it did! I loved this poem. I think you depicted struggles and times ...
Dec 25, 2014 -
Re: the crack of a bat
I thought this was such a cute poem. I loved the imagery and the descriptions of being on a field playing the game. The bug bit arms and the bare ...
Dec 25, 2014 -
Re: Seasons
Hi! So for starters I really really enjoyed this poem, and I liked a lot that you compared the seasons to the changes in a person. I think you beautifully ...
Dec 25, 2014 -
Re: storms
Hi, I'm new here but I really really liked your poem for several reasons. Firstly, the poem was filled with so much imagery. I could picture a bigger and darker ...
Dec 25, 2014
