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potatoefry2001

heart broken and useless to everybody in this tragic experience we call life

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: White Wolf

    Hey! Just came to say this is beautiful, so thank you for posting it. I like it because I can really feel the emotion coming out of the piece. I ...

    May 10, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Miles Apart

    AWWWWWWWWE This is beautiful. I love you with all my heart and I am so very happy I get to call you mine. I can't explain how we ended up ...

    May 9, 2019
  • Other » Realistic, Romantic Re: Still Remember

    Wow. You write amazing things. I just want to encourage you to keep writing!!!!!!! There are a couple spelling errors that I noticed while reading, so I thought I would ...

    May 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Oh, what a wonderful thing

    Wow. I have to say I love this writing piece. As someone who was just recently dumped, I have to say you really nailed that one. Especially when you said, ...

    Apr 26, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: my teenage juuls

    First I must say, I love the title of this piece! I am someone who is trying to quit juuling. This is my fourth day, and it is pieces like ...

    Apr 19, 2019
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Broken

    "So the plan is that we don't have a plan." Loved Dave's personality. Reminds me a lot of one of my really good friends. Your story (the characters and the ...

    Mar 18, 2019
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Health Re: Sorry dear

    Hey there, @269609, First I must say, WOW. I have never cried this hard after reading something someone has written. You have an incredible way with words, and I think ...

    Mar 18, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Don't be afraid

    It's okay to cry... It's okay to feel... @FireSpyGirl, you have me in tears, again... Everything you have said is so true. I am struggling with the fact that sometimes ...

    Mar 14, 2019
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Broken(song, lyrics)

    Hey @Anma, 'Tato here for a review. I love these so much!! Especially the line that says "But i'm free.... and you don't know me." You have left me speechless ...

    Mar 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What Is Music?

    Wow!! Hey there @secretrose29, 'Tato here for a review... I love the simplicity of the way you wrote this poem. Before I jump into the review, I have to say ...

    Feb 21, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Forever Yours...

    Hey there @Mangline, 'Tato here for a review... First of all, I must say the way you write is impeccable. I think I am almost in tears right now, sitting ...

    Feb 20, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: You Were There....

    Hey there, @Bellarke, 'Tato here for a review I'm honored you took my suggestion and wrote a poem about your girlfriend. The people in this life that give us love ...

    Feb 14, 2019
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: His actions didn't cause too much hurt

    UMMMMMM WOW I think I'm in TEARS!!!!! Are you sure you're 14?!!!???!!?!?!? You have the ability to move people with your words. I have been through my fair share of ...

    Feb 14, 2019
  • Other » General, Dramatic Re: Are my Stars too Far Away?

    Hey there, 'Tato here for a review... I have to agree with @FireSpyGirl, this is not a normal bucket list for a girl your age, but that's what makes it ...

    Feb 14, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Strong

    Hey, @FireSpyGirl, 'Tato here for a review.... First of all, I must say I know how you feel, especially the line you wrote, "I can get well, I must. But ...

    Feb 14, 2019


I would always rather be happy than dignified.
— Charlotte Brontë, Jane Eyre