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Re: White Wolf
Hey! Just came to say this is beautiful, so thank you for posting it. I like it because I can really feel the emotion coming out of the piece. I ...
May 10, 2019 -
Re: Miles Apart
AWWWWWWWWE This is beautiful. I love you with all my heart and I am so very happy I get to call you mine. I can't explain how we ended up ...
May 9, 2019 -
Re: Still Remember
Wow. You write amazing things. I just want to encourage you to keep writing!!!!!!! There are a couple spelling errors that I noticed while reading, so I thought I would ...
May 1, 2019 -
Re: Oh, what a wonderful thing
Wow. I have to say I love this writing piece. As someone who was just recently dumped, I have to say you really nailed that one. Especially when you said, ...
Apr 26, 2019 -
Re: my teenage juuls
First I must say, I love the title of this piece! I am someone who is trying to quit juuling. This is my fourth day, and it is pieces like ...
Apr 19, 2019 -
Re: Broken
"So the plan is that we don't have a plan." Loved Dave's personality. Reminds me a lot of one of my really good friends. Your story (the characters and the ...
Mar 18, 2019 -
Re: Sorry dear
Hey there, @269609, First I must say, WOW. I have never cried this hard after reading something someone has written. You have an incredible way with words, and I think ...
Mar 18, 2019 -
Re: Don't be afraid
It's okay to cry... It's okay to feel... @FireSpyGirl, you have me in tears, again... Everything you have said is so true. I am struggling with the fact that sometimes ...
Mar 14, 2019 -
Re: Broken(song, lyrics)
Hey @Anma, 'Tato here for a review. I love these so much!! Especially the line that says "But i'm free.... and you don't know me." You have left me speechless ...
Mar 8, 2019 -
Re: What Is Music?
Wow!! Hey there @secretrose29, 'Tato here for a review... I love the simplicity of the way you wrote this poem. Before I jump into the review, I have to say ...
Feb 21, 2019 -
Re: Forever Yours...
Hey there @Mangline, 'Tato here for a review... First of all, I must say the way you write is impeccable. I think I am almost in tears right now, sitting ...
Feb 20, 2019 -
Re: You Were There....
Hey there, @Bellarke, 'Tato here for a review I'm honored you took my suggestion and wrote a poem about your girlfriend. The people in this life that give us love ...
Feb 14, 2019 -
Re: His actions didn't cause too much hurt
UMMMMMM WOW I think I'm in TEARS!!!!! Are you sure you're 14?!!!???!!?!?!? You have the ability to move people with your words. I have been through my fair share of ...
Feb 14, 2019 -
Re: Are my Stars too Far Away?
Hey there, 'Tato here for a review... I have to agree with @FireSpyGirl, this is not a normal bucket list for a girl your age, but that's what makes it ...
Feb 14, 2019 -
Re: Strong
Hey, @FireSpyGirl, 'Tato here for a review.... First of all, I must say I know how you feel, especially the line you wrote, "I can get well, I must. But ...
Feb 14, 2019
