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Re: Engulfed By My Flames
no offense but how do you sleep at night? this poem seemed to rip the soul out of my cat and yeah...
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Lost without you
That is really good it just blew my mind at how easily people can come up with things like this it was really funny. you spelled good and wrote nicely ...
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: you say
you did a good poem nice ending
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Together? No.
I thought that this was very confusing and although it was nice it needs a lot of work. I am interested to see what you will do next time but ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Love- A Keepsake.
That was interesting but definitly needs work
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Friends
This is a great poem and I really enjoyed your talking about how friends are hard to get and even harder to forget. You have done something great here and ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Feelings I can't Ignore
This is a really great piece of poetry and I very much enjoyed it.
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Argument of the Fried Brains
I really enjoyed this piece that you have created, it was very realistic and I appreciate the Irony, great job.
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: I Want My Childhood Back
This is a very good poem but speaking as a kid (I'm not 77) I think that this was good and that you have done something great but it could ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Light and dark.
You have done a great job here creating a piece that reflects that the dark does not want to be what it is. I understand that this is slightly confusing ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: What we are
This is amazing. I am truly at a loss for words.
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Dying Love
This was an amazing poem that just struck me with it's simplicity and beauty of harsh life. This is a work of art that is just great.I like the simplicity ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
That is the funniest and most truthful thing that I have ever read. Great and by great I mean GREAT JOB!
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Jealousy of the Sand
I love the ending and your word choice was superb! Plus, you punctuated properly, your spelling was right, and it was all around fantastic!
Jan 3, 2011
