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Re: Emptiness
This is so sad...I hope you're okay! I thought this was about hanging yourself as I read through this poem. Don't be empty forever, find someone who will fill you ...
Sep 8, 2016 -
Re: I Thought We Were Fine
Wow. This turned out to be unexpected. I'm usually a sucker for heartbreak stories/poems/songs and I thought this would end up as a breakup or something like that. But then ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Why I Sit in the Rain
if this is a suicidal poem or a poem about depression I'm so sorry. I profile would explain it. But wow. I keep reading this over and over. Each line ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Pessimist
Some little errors to point out before I get to everything else: "I'm strapped to a chair and a head peace is on my head." (Change to headpiece.) "It's doused ...
Sep 4, 2016 -
Re: The Heartbreak Kid
My mouth went dry. My fingers don't know what to say. I *long pause actually* is there a camera recording me and my feelings? Everything I've been through? Everything that's ...
Aug 3, 2016 -
Re: Mom
Ely, did this happen to you? Did you "come out" to her? Just wondering, I'm sorry. I'm a Christian and we don't encourage that, but I'll support you if someone ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: Black Parade
@Elysium sameee I love the song you're referencing to. MCR's a great band. But JWW, you've written a magnificently mysterious poem. The imagery isn't that loaded with heavy-duty words xD ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: emo girl
This hit me hard. I admit that I relate to this, can understand this, and I know your pain. However, being labelled as an "emo" has its ups and downs. ...
Jul 23, 2016 -
Re: Watching Chapter 2
WHAT THE FRITOS?! What the actual corn chips?! Okay, wow I scrolled through "Watching" and then read this one. Wow. I like how you made the first mainly reflections & ...
Jul 20, 2016 -
Re: Headstrong
Hi there! Let me be the first to review on such a bright & early morning. :D too early for me but I have to get up. I check Poetry, ...
Jul 20, 2016 -
Re: A Murderer?
Awesome. I can't leave a proper review because my mind and fingers typing aren't connecting with all the thoughts swirling around my head like a swirlie. I read all your ...
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: Doors
I just had my second heartbreak yesterday. I've only loved two guys and they're both gone. The first had to move away, but it broke my heart when he left. ...
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: Books and Photographs
No. This can't be possible. This...I can't understand how and why you wrote this. I mean, C'mon. This is way too adorable. Filled with sweet events and cute little looks ...
Jul 17, 2016 -
Re: The Bullet
How did you think up such a terrifyingly beautiful poem? How much pain could one have been in to go through with this? I ask myself these questions, and though ...
Jul 17, 2016 -
Re: Catch Me When I Fall
Based on a true story... I can't even I can't even I can't even Wow. Like, holy snicker bars! I can't believe this. I really can't. If any of this ...
Jul 17, 2016
