if this is a suicidal poem or a poem about depression I'm so sorry. I relate....my profile would explain it. But wow. I keep reading this over and over. Each line makes me feel heavier and heavier, as if I'm sinking and no one is there to help me or save me. I don't know why I keep falling but everything just makes me so tired and it's too much to keep my head up anymore. This poem. This. It's just something I want to copy & paste into another place to save it. To look back and remember that there came a time I felt like this and maybe in the future I won't. I felt connected with these short 19 lines. It says so much.
I am not sure how to entirely explain it. Just the fact that anything sharp sings a silent siren's song to me personally. I hold onto every dream I have and write it down for safekeeping. I have written letters to shadows that will never be delivered to them. They will never read it. The rain is something that matches my grey, numb mood. I'm so sorry if you're struggling with anything or anyone at the moment. If there is anything I can do to help ease the hurt....
Thank you for posting this. I hope you have a happy day tomorrow and can have a genuine smile on your face, embracing sunshine instead of the rain.
~Freak
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