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Re: A Visitor From Far Away Lands
Hi, MaybeAndrew, Pineapple here for a short review. I loved the concept of this poem. In the beginning, I was confused, but then it clicked, the analogy of the ship ...
Aug 4, 2021 -
Re: Why sad poems?
Hi, anne27, I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was so realistic and relatable to me. It was almost like you were reading my thoughts! My absolute favorite lines were, ...
Jul 25, 2021 -
Re: Hidden Holding Hands
Hi, MellyBourne, Pineapple here for a short review! First, I absolutely enjoyed reading your poem. It was beautifully crafted and totally relatable. At the end you sort of left on ...
Jul 14, 2021 -
Re: Maltheus - Two
Hi, TheScribe, Pineapple here for a little review. Yay! I was so excited when this came out. This whole chapter had me on the edge of my seat. It was ...
Jul 5, 2021 -
Re: Maltheus - One
Hello there, Pineapple here for a review! I am absolutely in love with science fiction and futuristic works. I was hooked onto this story as soon as you mentioned "holovision." ...
Jul 2, 2021 -
Re: When I tell you, "It's alright."
Hi, Pineapple here for a little review! First, I really loved how you took an acrostic style for this poem. You spelled out the phrase in the title, which I ...
Jul 2, 2021 -
Re: Him
Hello, FireEyes, Pineapple here for a little review! First off....wow, this was beautiful. It was a story of falling for someone who couldn't seem to reciprocate the same feelings. It ...
Jul 1, 2021 -
Re: Speaking to the Air
Hello, Crunch, Pineapple here for a little review. First, this poem was beautifully written. I found it interesting the poem-especially the parts in quotations- were similar to affirmations. Such as ...
Jul 1, 2021 -
Re: Unworthy wave
Hi, silented1, Pineapple here for a little review. First, I really liked this poem. I thought it was very well-written. I liked the metaphorical phrases you used. You resembled how ...
Jun 30, 2021 -
Re: Till You Find Your Glow Again
Hi, WinnyWriter, Pineapple here for a little review! I really loved reading this poem. It was almost like a reassurance. I really liked that the overall message of the story ...
Jun 26, 2021 -
Re: Lanterns and Letters
Hey, MapleWay, sorry this is late, but I just came across this piece of writing! This was such a great poem! I really liked how it was so thrilling. The ...
Jun 26, 2021 -
Re: First love- chapter 1 (revised) and 2 (first draft)
Hi, Froggy, Pineapple here for a short review! I really loved this. The thoughts that were running through Lucas' head are what I imagine a boy thinking when he has ...
Jun 26, 2021 -
Re: Mother...
Hi, YourFriendQuirks! I thought I'd come by for a review. First, I am so sorry you had to go through this. I praise you for even writing about it. It ...
Jun 3, 2021 -
Re: Rainy Day
Hi! I thought I would drop by for a little review since I absolutely love poetry! Today was a very rainy day where I live and this was the perfect ...
May 29, 2021 -
Re: Never Let You Die
Hi! I love this. Simply put, it was so impactful. It short and quick. It got right to the point and had that emotional part in it. The poem was ...
May 22, 2021