phantomwriterjoe

Alright, you've had a bunch of reviews and comments so far, so probably nothing I'd say would make much of a difference. But here goes... I agree with the fact ...

I like how you keep tying in the moondust with the rest of the poem. For me, the moondust represents the little girl using her imagination to escape from the ...

I like this poem because it is honest and simple to how you were feeling at the time. Unfortunately, I think it is also the kind of poem all of ...

First error I saw was that you said sparkles instead of sparkle. Like one of the other reviewers, I'm also not a fan of the drinking/partying/alcoholic stuff, unless if somehow ...

Alright, so this gives us a lot more detail than part one, and now I'm starting to get to know Sadie better. One error I noticed right away was that ...

I'll read on to part two of Chapter One, and If I learn a little bit more about where the plot is going and feel curious to read on after ...

So basically this is about someone who feels a way that they know they shouldn't, and that person is also telling us that we shouldn't feel the way that he/she ...

So basically this is a poem about someone who loves someone else. I'm assuming the point of view of this person right here is male just because of the masculine ...

The Sleeping Void: I liked the imagery and how it definitely felt like sleep feels. The known Lie: I like the point you made here about lies, about how they ...

So I'm not sure if this is serious or not. I thought it was until I read the review below and I was then unsure. Either way I don't really ...

Wow I really liked this. It was sweet and it captured perfectly what it's like to be young and have friends. I didn't catch that the guy you were writing ...

Okay Interesting Idea, but the same thing could be accomplished with anything. There are a multitude of words one could write and then display with no text and it would ...

First off, well written story. I do have a few problems with it. First Paragraph is full of short sentences that should be combined, and then the second paragraph is ...

Wow, really pretty poem. Love the imagery and the feeling it conveys. I feel like the person that this poem is about is someone who is very trusting, and knows ...

Interesting. I do like this poem because I know that we all have these things locked away inside of us. It is an interesting poem, though it doesn't have a ...