penfeme

Lovely! Just the kind of poetry I enjoy. I came to write a review, but I'm having trouble with that, lol. Here goes... Punctuation. You have a lack of it, ...

Hi there. Review time! Oh and before I begin, you made me laugh because I didn't recognize Urie in your profile pic at first, haha. So overall, I thought your ...

Felistia, I have asked the last line of your poem my entire life. I love the ethereal description of the sky and such. I love this: "A canvas of the ...

Strange, I like this! It's so clear and well-structured and the message is spot-on! Since I don't have any grievances with this piece, I'll just review what I like about ...

Hey there, This is quite interesting. A lot of poetry I read, whether published or not, have unique styles. Your work here exemplifies this. In this review, I will talk ...

Hey there! So this reminds me oddly of a sestina. It's nicely strctured so that the lines fit in several different places. Your imagery is also vibrant; while reading it, ...

Okay, so not a lot of works (poems, lyrics) make feel this way. Three of your works are on the featured page; that says a lot. This is the first ...

Hey there, penfeme here reviewing your work. Overall, I love the imagery you here to describe the setting. Makes me feel as if I am standing there with you! I ...

"Being a teenager sucks." You should leave it there, it sucks ALL the time. Just kidding. Ha, overall, I enjoyed your piece, mostly because I relate to it somewhat. I'll ...

Hi there DustAfterRain! I rarely really try to understand works like these (shorter pieces), but for some reason I did for this. I must say that even though it's a ...

Hey there! I have reviewed/posted/published anything on here for like a couple weeks - and I'm new, ha. Well on with the review. Firstly, you have a lovely poem here, ...

Hey there! I see you just joined today. I joined a week ago so welcome fellow new member! Anyways, despite the fact that I sometimes write really long pieces, I ...

Trying to get in one last review before this is over! Okay this will be short. Firstly, overall I love this. The imagery is beautiful; I can see it in ...

Hi Morrigan! Briefly reviewing your lovely haiku, here, on Review Day. :D I can't write a good haiku to save my life, something you've done exceptionally here. I love it ...

Hi there! So I'm not exactly sure the nature of this piece but it really interests me. There's not a lot for me to review, but I attempt to do ...