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I have to say that I love it. The pain, that's the pain I know so well. Lying to yourself and then you write and the ink becomes your blood ...

I can feel the emotions coming through. It's neat that you used a letter to form this poem. I like how you ended it with "Someone that misses the real ...

This was very moving. It exposes that, even after the Haitain earthquake, the Haiti people are still not recovered and there is not enough help for anyone. You definitely deserved ...

To be honest, I'm not sure if I like it. It's...alright in some aspects but very cliche in some ways. I can predict the story line from here. The girl ...

If I cussed in this review, then would you know that I really liked it? I did. I loved the flow of it, the feeling of it. Indifference is the ...

It's a rather difficult poem to understand. Punctuation and capitalization need some fixing. I wouldn't use dashes around "By the very ones I gave them to" nor would I use ...

I like the mood and the visual. However, I would like to see more punctuation in it. I know that there is poetic liscense and all, but it's hard to ...

So this was rather interesting. It's a nice love poem and normally I never review love poems. I wouldn't change anything, besides a few nit picky things that I prefer, ...

Short, but interesting. It took me a second to get what you were talking about, despite the poem's name. It seems like I don't pay attention. The flow is nearly ...

I vote with WritersUnleashed. Draw it with turtles. Seriously though, this was cool. It made me laugh. Poor Charlie, he was such a mean kid. That could be wonderful to ...

It was very cute and sweet and very descriptive of the show. Basically, you summed of SpongeBob in a poem. Heehee I love that show, I won bonus points in ...

It's an interesting idea, however the poem is very cliche. It flows nicely and the ending is very intriguing, however the beginning is very overused in ideas about death. It ...

Very interesting, I am intrigued. This is very detailed and it was beautiful. Your description is very interesting. I hope you write a lot more with this. I want to ...

It is a very nice poem, however it does not draw the reader in. You basically tell everything that the reader needs to know instead of showing it. That is ...

Okay this was very good. I really am touched by this poem, since I am also having this debate with my parents before college. I agree with Miko. That line ...