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Thank you i will and when i do please review!

My story is nearing completion; I will soon be back as I was, I’m almost finished with fables, for I’ll now announce I’m a mermaid,Though I said I was a ...

Thank You guys very much for the constructive criticism Keep up the honesty!

You surely got your point across. i loved this this was truly emotional. great poem i loved how it was effective with the rhyme scheme, great job!

Are you crazy? (no pun intended) this was awesome especially seeing as though you just wrote it as a writer dome of our greatest pieces come int he spur of ...

Persephoneia basically seemed to point out all of the errors i think that you could've used more sensory words to make the villain in this piece seem more a villain ...

Besides the thing that Kafkaescence pointed out i like how you didn't directly say what the poem was speaking about. it made the poem that more interesting. and when you ...

i have three words that can sum up how i feel about those piece 'i loved it'. i liked how you conveyed the narrator's emotions.

THank you guys it was one of my old poems thanks ALOT!

this is too short to really tell a story of what happens but it leaves space fro the mind to wander it gives you space to paint the rest of ...

if only some people had read this poem before getting married it was great but i think you could've added a little more to the pain that the woman was ...

very short and stragiht to the point it speaks of defiance and determination o like it