onedarkhorizon

I think this was a great attempt, I too am not really a bird lover but still, I got the sentiment. It was nice to read but like others have ...

I thought this was brilliant, although I have to agree about the layout. I've mentioned this on another review I done earlier. It's just that it can make all the ...

I too was hooked reading this, I loved the characters. The possibilities of what you could do next are almost endless, I'm genuinely excited to read more! Of course there ...

I really enjoyed it, I initially only skimmed over a few lines but I loved what I read. So as usual, I started from the top and read it word ...

I very much agree with Octobergrace. It's beautiful, although spacing seems like a little thing, it can actually do your writing the world of good. I admit that I've often ...

Well it's very good for your first poem! At risk of repeating myself across reviews, poetry isn't really my forte. Although I'm trying to be as open as I can. ...

This was beautiful, in a sense that it made me think quite a lot. I'm trying to read more poetry and branch out to other types of writing rather than ...

I don't like commenting on errors that have already been mentioned but I think all of them were mentioned anyway ^^, It was really good, I loved reading it and ...

I love this genre so I'm always reading stuff like this and yours didn't disappoint! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I definitely can't wait to read next chapter, great opening. ...

Sorry! I really wanted to give it a review but I have to go to work in like ten minutes. I just wanted to let you know that I really ...

Although I have to agree with Planve, I didn't really get an overall meaning but I'm not a poet person either. I'm just trying to branch out and read what ...

This isn't something that I'd usually read, meaning that it isn't my favourite genre. However I've been advised to branch out a little and I'm glad I did. This was ...

I can't think of anything else to comment on that hasn't been said already. I enjoyed reading and yes, I liked the whole water-weaving element too. It put your own ...

Like a couple of people below who have already reviewed, I couldn't find any errors either. It was beautifully written and I'm not ashamed to say that I read it ...

Although I didn't intend on leaving a review, I just wanted to read it over and hope you continued -because I loved it. It was really, I don't know, I ...