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Love in hand, ardent lovers are frequent, but devotion, Adoration, In most circumstances the limit is lust. Lust? Devotion? Adoration? Are these feeble nouns aimed desolately at ‘Him?’ ‘Her?’
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layers of meaning poem.
you may find, my poetry is different to many others. i break rules, i hate with a passion, poetry that is simply a few beautiful, but overused words, to describe ...
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virgin kiss.
you may find, my poetry is different to many others. i break rules, i hate with a passion, poetry that is simply a few beautiful, but overused words, to describe ...
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im not so sure about this poem
i like it, but don't. it's a love/hate relationship i have with it.- unfinished. advice to continue futhur would be lovely. because i feel that this poem can brew into ...
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VERY old poem.
this really goes against every poem i write, if you have read my previous poetry, you'd understand i hate poetry like this. but, i found this poem, that i wrote ...
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deceased mind.
cancerous thoughts, disease of the mind,infests the figure with mutated design.vitriolicacidicstreaming tears fall, ivory skin's engraved with flaws.mulberry bruises, best at empty,rippled intuition,
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Help write a mothers day poem?
I'm writing mom a mothers day poem, but I am stuck, could I perhaps have word suggestions, phrase suggestions, etc? anything to help? It's unedited, the rhythm is off, and ...
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Haven't posted in about a year.
I am feeling in a peculiar delusion - my emotions are animated and the mirror reflects a talcun dusting underneath the luminous rays. The talcun frolics crisp and frail, the ...
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unfinished, advice?
To the mortal figure’s disarray, engraved with imperfection and mistakes-a masterpiece of mass destruction,rejected discard of disfunction;was not god’s final work of art,a complex design of a ski
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Please, please just give your opinion - even if brief.
The epitome of everything,anything,nothing.Emotions are more than tactile sense,thoughts covert from one another,burnt to the back of my mind,graved over with timeless memories.Un-solitarily existent.
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Kings Order
I'd love any responses to this considering I haven't been on this for a long time and this is some of my most recent work (although about a year old-haven't ...
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ID
Again I'd love some feedback on this! Also how you interpret this! sorry if it's a bit sloppy, I never really got around to cleaning it all up but I'm ...
