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Re: All for the good of Friendship, Poetry And Pie
mmmmmmm ... pie ...
Thu Apr 07, 2005 3:07 am -
Re: Space Station 6
...really, really short, this entry. But, actually, you've sort of got me hooked already, and I'm not sure why. But, keep going!!!
Wed Apr 06, 2005 10:30 pm -
Re: Tapestry of Ages
That's pretty interesting. Judging just from that, you might be a good fantasy writer. I don't have any problems with it. Good job.
Tue Apr 05, 2005 3:32 am -
Re: Departure
The writing is good, but the storyline was just...nothing special. That's all I can really say. How old was this?
Sun Apr 03, 2005 4:29 pm -
Re: something to have fun with
Ummm ... this thread has been dead for a while now. We all just kinda stopped posting ...
Sat Apr 02, 2005 7:28 pm -
Re: the muse
It was ... alright, at best. I mean, it was a good piece, but, it didn't really have anything special goin' for it, you know? I see what your saying, ...
Fri Apr 01, 2005 2:28 am -
Re: Papercut
They do have pretty interesting lyrics, but, you know, I just can't seem to get into their music. Ecspecially their vocalist. His voice is too ... ughthhangthgahhhhhh ... you know? ...
Thu Mar 31, 2005 3:12 am -
Re: Blessing
Thanks for the crit emotion_less. And geez, it's freakin' drama ... gosh ... you always have to analyze stuff ... it's so annoying ... I hate you ... just kidding ...
Tue Mar 29, 2005 4:26 am -
Re: So Many Memories.... Aren't There?
Not many stories can make me as sad as this. Well done. This was an interesting way to illustrate their life as lovers. I could tell that you had put ...
Tue Mar 29, 2005 2:32 am -
Re: Sunchips and Coke
... That's pretty wierd. But I enjoyed it. It made me laugh. But I did have to copy and paste it and blow it up to read it. If you ...
Sun Mar 27, 2005 11:31 pm -
Re: Song of the Exile (revised by suggestions)
Well, technically it is freeverse, because not all of the stanzas have the same amount of lines. Freeverse poetry always has the same rhyme scheme in each stanza (for instance, ...
Sat Mar 26, 2005 9:21 pm -
Re: Concerning Gods (short piece)
It is an interesting story. It's kind of in that style that sounds like someone is actually telling it to you. I'll be looking forward to a continuation. Oh yeah, ...
Sat Mar 26, 2005 4:27 am -
Re: too long
That's cute ... just kiddin' ...
Tue Mar 22, 2005 4:05 am -
Re: Demon Chapter I (needs new title-please read!!!)
Yeah, it is possible to be over-descriptive (as I have found out), and this is only a small part of the first chapter. I didn't realize how small the piece ...
Mon Mar 21, 2005 10:54 pm -
Re: I Was His Slave
Yeah, it really was awesome. Very well put.
Mon Mar 21, 2005 8:06 pm