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Re: The Work of Sins
Great poem... I love the way you write. It tells the story of a girl who is damned for eternity by her sins. It makes sense. The sins she has ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 2.2 - Look Who Crashed the Party.
Hello I'm sandman and I will be you reviewer today. I like it. I love the part about Gypsies. The style of writing is essentially the best part for me. ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 3
Hello I'm Sandman and I will be your reviewer today. I don't think there is much to say. You have an amazing story already. I love it. I like the ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 35 (Once Upon a Time)
Hello. Okay lets get started. I Think that it is a little to long and people may lose interest when they get bored. It is wired for me because I ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Society Only By Name- Part Nine: Fabricated Sociology and Philistinism
I told you I would go back and read the others. And here I am. I love this you are doing a great job. This false society you talk about ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Scenes from St. Patrick's Day, 2016.
Okay....Okay....Hello. I kinda like it. It is fun and it takes you into what St.Patrick's day is like. I like that. Over all the poem is nicely written and gives ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Complaint Haiku
Hello. I'm sorry. I'm really confused as to what the poem is about. It seems a little to short and final. I would add more. The title also leads you ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Society Only By Name- Part Ten: Neutral Ones
Love it. This is good. Not just good it's great. It tells about a society that is sort of similar to ours kind of. You develop a great model for ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: rainy night--on a sunny morning
Beautifully written. This is just...lovely. I know how you came up with this because it almost looks professional to me. This is one of the best that I have read ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: A poem dedicated for a mother's love
OMG... I was listening to Idiot Wind (Amanda Bergman) Mama you've been on my mind when I was reading this. You did a F*****g great job at portraying the mother. ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Home
This is AMAZING!!!!!!! I know how it feels to not be able to return home. The are truly some of the feelings I have had. It is terrible and you ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Prom Night
I will be honest here. You have some talent. I will give you that but, be careful with how you approach mental situations next time do it almost exactly like ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Records in the Concrete
I love that you went in depth when you described things. It made me confused for a minute at the end because my mind is so weird but, that is ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Living
I...Love...It. It is so true all of it. I'm currently just loathing how well this is written compared to how my book is written. You have a way of writing ...
Apr 3, 2016