noelsugarcube

Awww, that's sweet of that lady. I wish all people were that nice, then we wouldn't have poverty/wars/etc. *sigh* all in good time. But anyways, review time! =) You don't ...

Ok, very dark.... so sad, Max should have lasted at least two meals =3. So, review time, no spelling/grammar issues as far as I can see. the one thing that ...

*shivers* so, scary! *runs and hides behind rock*. Ok, so first off like this poem very much. Feels like it's been created from deep thoughts. As for grammar, I see ...

This..... is so depressingly true(well, if it's about being racist and the likes). So, first off, liked the word choice. It was very unique to use words such as,"repugnant". There ...

So, this narrator person sounds very well, spoiled? I was thinking at first that this was a little girl narrating this poem, but toward the end it felt more like ...

So, first off, I get the feeling that this story could be true. Very true in fact, and the horrible thing about this is that it has to be a ...

Ok, so first off, I think this poem (is it?) is very thought filled. You obviously put some thought into this(well, more than some). I guess my first question to ...

Ok, i admire the fact you some how made an awesome poem so short, but any reason why? im just curious. SO then, as for reviewing, this poem, like i ...

This is a morbid poem..... well, suppose it said so at the beginning. So as for my critique of this poem, first, good choice of words. It was very descriptive ...

Well, first off, great story! the plot was interesting, though a little fuzzy. There where many spelling mistakes (greef, ment, uncontious, crumbleing, etc.), but i figure, "hey, everyone makes mistak

"when the girl extracts the phone from her body", that is a great way to start this. Though it makes me think shes' a robot or something. The word choice ...

This is a very interesting poem. For starters, word choice made my skin crawl (yeah, I get freaked at the smallest things) and it was very descriptive of the scene. ...

great story, but seems more of a essay thingy or advice column article(yes, I mean this as a complement) rather than a short story. I figure that other people have ...

nice story, kinda want to know which song you got this idea from. ok, first off, grammar and stuff were pretty good, but some comma issues. second,shim? I know it's ...

Great story! =) I really liked how it leaves you hanging at the end when she is about to die (or not?). One thing thought that really really urked me ...