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Hey there niteowl, Myjaspercat here to review your poem Nit-Picks Bridge may be icy Personally, I would add some form of punctuation here (preferably a period.) Just like I didn't ...

Hey there PastelSlushie, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks "Thank you for tuning into News 39. News 39 doesn't really sound like an official news channel. Yeah, 39 ...

Hey there EmoBear, Myjaspercat here to leave you a reveiw Your love is like the rain of spring, falling ever so lightly just to kiss the earth. I love this ...

I'm Tom Price, well let's just say that my life was pretty boring, I don't know if I could cope without this happening. It was Friday. Everyone loves Fridays, but ...

Hey there UndertoadLuigi1, Myjaspercat here to leave some sort of review. Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks Mario was walking with his brother when he noticed a hurt female human, "Heya "Heya" should be lowercas

Hey there Myjaspercat here to review your poem Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks late at night when the blinds are closed but the headlights still filter through, illuminating my room I wonder I would ...

Hey there MissGangamash, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks He should have asked for fame i nstead he sought talent [comma] b ut what is skill without recognition? ...

Hey there DarshayataDeka, Myjaspercat here to review another poem of yours. Line-by-Line/Nit-Pick So, I'm an aspiring writer, [I would remove the coma] a nd the dreaded writer's block [comma] I ...

Hey there Fabis101, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks Dear, Are you intending for there to be ambiguity regarding the person you're addressing this poem too? p lease ...

Hey there LeutnantSchweinehund, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks A young knight rode to great Hearth's Hold, his shield was teal and [his] hair shone gold. A face ...

Hey there Biluata, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review Nit-Picks your disapproval [comma] spinning ‘round my neck “What a shame, what a shame, [I would leave off this comma] ...

Hey there Thundahguy Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks For your reference: Grammar/Spelling Punctuation Overall Comments The light of day vanished as the city changed into

Hey there DarshayataDeka, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review as promised. Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks There's a tree on her back, o f which she's mighty proud. With black branches and foliage ...

Hey there LadyShadows, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks Once upon a time there was a beautiful young lady. She was lonely, [remove the comma] but it suddenly ...

Hey there ElvenJedi, Myjaspercat here again to leave another review... hope you don't mind. Nit-Picks [there's] no pencil for my agitated fingers I really like this image, I think it ...