Chapter 1:
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I'm Tom Price, well let's just say that my life was pretty boring, I don't know if I could cope without this happening. It was Friday. Everyone loves Fridays, but not me. "Everyone was all like "Yay, it's the weekend, let's all go to the cinema."But I think that Friday's are rubbish, absolute bog standard day, but there is one thing that dosen't make Friday bad. You see on Friday, my parents are so rushed to get to work, they don't get a chance to slober all over me, they just simply give me a peck on the cheek. I'm really into comics, so much that I would call my self the darkest artist, if you get what I mean *joke drum plays*, but I realise after making that cringy joke *tumbleweed blows*, I feel so run down about that tumble weed that I think we should move on to the next sentence. All the people in school think I'm terrible which is really annoying beacuse at home I'm like the Superman of Creativity,The Picasso of Comic Books.But in school I'm just a little boy, who daydreams too much. I'm Currently working on a Top Secret Project called the "Silver Bullet". "Go Off and Retire, Batman" One of the headlines would say. "Imagine me, Tom Price becoming rich." But that wasn't happening right now, so I still hate Fridays. But the truth is that Today was different, Today would be superb. It was after School, and I was wating to get collected (as usual). I was waiting at the Front Steps, when I saw something so drastically horrible, my jaw nearly dropped off when I saw this.It was Scottish man, dressed as some sort of Martian-space like Dragon in a UPS Van.He got out and talked to a man called Malcolm, he said Oi, Malcom theres another one in tomorrow" said the strange man as he lifted the parcel into Malcolm's hand. "Alright, Is it the INTI " asked the so-called Malcom. "Aye me lad, Be seeing you Tommorow". I was very intrigued to find out what was this so called 'INTI'. Suddenly, I raced back just to find out that my mum was looking for Me. "I was so worried, you can't just wonder off like that sweetie, Ok? " said Mum, who's face just looked so worried. We went home and ate fish and chips. As I fell onto my bed, I started to fall into my long, stretchy, dark dream of nothingness.
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