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Hey there Rascalover, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. A few nit-picks That leaves more mystery This is just a more personal choice, but I would omit the word ...

Hey there LizEmo, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review A girl with long blond hair , blue eyes , and a big tribal tattoo on her neck open (s) ...

Hey there TheBlueCat, Myjaspercat here to leave a review. The stars are scattered across the blanket of [the] night like It's probably just a personal thing, but I would consider ...

Hey there EKK15, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review Silence tastes like a weak green tea. I absolutely love this beginning. I don't know what it is about it, ...

Hey there WanderlustStardust, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. First off welcome to YWS!! Red, the color of roses; of love and rage under autumn leaves- Orange, for technology, ...

Hey there ILived, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Line-by-Line The black breeze awaits I feel like there's a need for punctuation here ready to break in Its cold ...

Hey there EmilyRMaiorano, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. I do not believe in love Place a period here. I think that having this line as a single sentence ...

Hey there writingleos7, late welcome to YWS! Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. So first of all, I found this piece to be absolutely breathtaking, which, in my experience ...

Hey there Bitty, late welcome to YWS Myjaspercat here to review your piece. Line-by-Line/Nit-picks. Maybe we shouldn't be doing this... maybe this is [it's] wrong, the boy with scented clothing ...

Hey there Aaraju, Myjaspercat here to review your poem. Line-by-Line/Nit-Pick Everyday I see him So happy, so innocent he seems I would change the second 'so' here if I were ...

Hey there Tylexie, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks When the storm hits when lightning strikes when thunder booms in the sky, Are you afraid? Lowercase 'and' in ...

Hey there ThanaTitania, welcome to YWS! Myjaspercat here to review your piece So, I don't really have an Line-by-Line for you because to be honest I was just slightly confused ...

Hey there klennon14, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks Open up to my heart *insert comma here* like a morning glory opens up to the rising sun *insert ...

Hey there MissGangamash, Myjaspercat here to review the next installment of your fabulous story. Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks I watch as it scuttles from the passageway and into my cell. As still as ...

Hey there Holiday30, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review on this fine of review days Line-by-Line/Nit-picks It was the day of Jugo’s funeral and all the remaining dragons and ...