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Re: Under the Maple
Hey Edelweiss, Myjaspercat here to give you a review. She sits under the maple tree. I like this opening. I think it starts off the scene quite well. Hair short ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: But If You Close Your Eyes
Hey xMnemosyne, Myjaspercat here to drop you a review... At first, Titus wants to run. Then he realizes he has no idea where Ides is and he already lost Flavius ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: ...Just who are you..?
Hey NicolMemo Myjaspercat here to give you a review on this wonderful of days. The coldness --of the squall-- Is gripping my I am going to assume that this is ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Veil in the Wind
Hey Temi, Myjaspercat here for a review... My love, I would suggest adding a longer pause here I have never imagined That my lips would conjure such words Whose first ...
Jun 16, 2016 -
Re: Done dirty
Hey Spartan118, Myjaspercat here to give you a review So I noticed that you were kind of new to the site (not to new but recently new) so I just ...
Jun 16, 2016 -
Re: But Never Forget
Hey TrueFantasy, Myjaspercat here to give you a review.. You sit on your chair with black strings of hair falling down on around your face, start a new line here ...
Jun 14, 2016 -
Re: What is Freedom?
Hey Felistia, It feels good to back on YWS and to be writing reveiws again. That being said, I would just like you to know that this may not be ...
Jun 14, 2016 -
Re: Powerful love
Hey Julissadestiny, First of all I want to welcome you to YWS. Now that the greetings are covered, why dont we talk about your poem. The idea behind this is ...
Jun 14, 2016 -
Re: I am Luke.
Hey retrodisco666, Myjaspercat here to review for you on such a wonderful day of days. Ok, so to start with, wow. I really liked the concept to this poem and ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: Last Minute Gifts
Hey Mage, Myjaspercat here to give you a quick review... I've learned that Christmas Eve is the worst time to be shopping. It's amazing to see how many people are ...
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: Layla Johnson
Hey karinazuniga000, Myjaspercat here to give you a reveiw on this amazing december review day. Let's get to it why don't we. Layla Johnson is an African American girl who ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: A Christmas Story [part one]
Hey Tigeraye Myjaspercat here to drop you a reveiw First, I see that you are fairly new to YWS so I want to say welcome and if I could give ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: My Life in a Bizarre Town: Prologue
Hey Kman, Myjaspercat here to give you a review So, actually I saw your second chapter to this opended it up and read a few lines then thought 'why start ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Summer Irony
Hey penfeme, Myjaspercat here to drop a review Wow, this was simply breahtless. I love the whole feeling to it and the way the words flow. I'm pretty sure I ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: night sky
Hey Rubykae, You asked and I recieved. Happy Review Day, I hope you have gotten some great reviews and given some on this glorious of days. Let's get on with ...
Nov 29, 2015
