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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Under the Maple

    Hey Edelweiss, Myjaspercat here to give you a review. She sits under the maple tree. I like this opening. I think it starts off the scene quite well. Hair short ...

    Jun 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: But If You Close Your Eyes

    Hey xMnemosyne, Myjaspercat here to drop you a review... At first, Titus wants to run. Then he realizes he has no idea where Ides is and he already lost Flavius ...

    Jun 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: ...Just who are you..?

    Hey NicolMemo Myjaspercat here to give you a review on this wonderful of days. The coldness --of the squall-- Is gripping my I am going to assume that this is ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Veil in the Wind

    Hey Temi, Myjaspercat here for a review... My love, I would suggest adding a longer pause here I have never imagined That my lips would conjure such words Whose first ...

    Jun 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Done dirty

    Hey Spartan118, Myjaspercat here to give you a review So I noticed that you were kind of new to the site (not to new but recently new) so I just ...

    Jun 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: But Never Forget

    Hey TrueFantasy, Myjaspercat here to give you a review.. You sit on your chair with black strings of hair falling down on around your face, start a new line here ...

    Jun 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: What is Freedom?

    Hey Felistia, It feels good to back on YWS and to be writing reveiws again. That being said, I would just like you to know that this may not be ...

    Jun 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Powerful love

    Hey Julissadestiny, First of all I want to welcome you to YWS. Now that the greetings are covered, why dont we talk about your poem. The idea behind this is ...

    Jun 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I am Luke.

    Hey retrodisco666, Myjaspercat here to review for you on such a wonderful day of days. Ok, so to start with, wow. I really liked the concept to this poem and ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Last Minute Gifts

    Hey Mage, Myjaspercat here to give you a quick review... I've learned that Christmas Eve is the worst time to be shopping. It's amazing to see how many people are ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Other Re: Layla Johnson

    Hey karinazuniga000, Myjaspercat here to give you a reveiw on this amazing december review day. Let's get to it why don't we. Layla Johnson is an African American girl who ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: A Christmas Story [part one]

    Hey Tigeraye Myjaspercat here to drop you a reveiw First, I see that you are fairly new to YWS so I want to say welcome and if I could give ...

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: My Life in a Bizarre Town: Prologue

    Hey Kman, Myjaspercat here to give you a review So, actually I saw your second chapter to this opended it up and read a few lines then thought 'why start ...

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Summer Irony

    Hey penfeme, Myjaspercat here to drop a review Wow, this was simply breahtless. I love the whole feeling to it and the way the words flow. I'm pretty sure I ...

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: night sky

    Hey Rubykae, You asked and I recieved. Happy Review Day, I hope you have gotten some great reviews and given some on this glorious of days. Let's get on with ...

    Nov 29, 2015


To be a master of metaphor is the greatest thing by far. It is the one thing that cannot be learnt from others, and it is also a sign of genius.
— Aristotle, Poetics