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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Feeling

    Hey there, here to review. I found this piece intriguing, and it caught my attention from the very beginning. I like how every time after you repeat: Have you ever ...

    Dec 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: 58 Poppies

    Hello there, here for a review. This was a nice poem, however it was a bit confusing to me since I don't understand what (or who) the number 58 represents. ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Found and Lost

    Hello there, here for a review. I really enjoyed this poem. It had a very nice concept, and it flowed beautifully. I really like how you don't rhyme everything, just ...

    Dec 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Speaking Skies

    Hello there, here for a review. I liked this poem which showed the vastness and the beauty of the skies. Many people do poem's about the beauty of it, but ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: In War

    Hello there, here to review. That was a really cool poem. I liked the concept of it, but mostly, I liked the way you structured it. It is very unique ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dream within a Dream

    Hey niteowl, here for a review. This was a nice poem, and I really like the concept of dreams within dreams and never ending cycles. Talking about never ending cycles, ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Drowning; Sinking.

    Hello, here for a review. This was a very nice poem. I think the fact that you kind of interrupt the story with " Drowning, sinking. " every time makes ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Tune

    Hey there, here for a review. I loved this poem, and I love the importance you gave to that tune. Sometimes I cry alone at night Whistling away that tune ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Other Re: The Season of the Dead

    Hello there, here for a review. This was a cool poem. I liked the concept and the way you showed the mood. It is very unique in itself, since it ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Scarlet soul

    Hello there, here to review. This was a very cool poem. I find it funny that the first time you read this, the first part of the piece seems inspirational, ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Grey

    Hello, here to review (I hope I'm not annoying you with all the reviews). This was a great poem, I really liked it. The beginning was intriguing. I met someone ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Spark

    Hello there, here for another review! I loved this poem, especially since I love the Hunger Games as well, but apart from that it really was a good poem. I ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Tug of War

    Hello there, here to review. This is a very nice poem. It is also very true, which makes it so much better. We all have two-faced friends sometimes. Well, on ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: More Modern Love Poems

    Hello there, here to review. I liked both your poems, but I find that the second one is better. I will start by reviewing the first. It is a good ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ode to the Night Sky

    Hello there, happy Review Day! This is a wonderful poem. I like mostly the first and second stanzas, for they seemed to have excellent flow and ryming. I like this ...

    Nov 24, 2013


It is a happiness to wonder; it is a happiness to dream.
— Edgar Allan Poe