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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's Not Your Fault

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review! First off, I love the movie Good Will Hunting, and this poem does not disappoint! It is beautifully written, emotional, and ah, makes ...

    Oct 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: growing-down

    Hey there! Mordax here for a review. I lovedddd this poem so decided to review it a bit differently by simply walking you through my thoughts as I read: thoughts ...

    Sep 26, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Aether's Heart 9.1

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review! First off, I love how much Railyn talks to himself. Incredibly relatable and provides a good balance of comic relief. We get a ...

    Sep 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I'm Not

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review! I loved this poem! I loved the rhymes and it had a beautiful flow that rolled off the tongue easily. I love your ...

    Sep 7, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Never Forget - Part Two - 1 Hours, and 14 Minutes

    Hey, Mordax again to finish reviewing! they were crawling, but not like a baby crawls, like how a dog crawls, on hands and feet, not on knees. Oooh, eerie, I ...

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Never Forget - 14 Hours, and 28 Minutes

    Hey there, Mordax here for a review! Let's jump right in! I will sprinkle in suggestions, my thoughts, and what I liked throughout: The street was quiet, the sun was ...

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: The Baker

    Hey there! Mordax here with a review! I really liked this short story. It was sad, hopeless, and dark. I only have a few suggestions, though none applies to the ...

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Whatever

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review! I loved the rhymes you incorporated through this poem. It was very satisfying to read as well as created a good flow. You ...

    Aug 29, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Glass of Soda

    Hey there, Mordax here for a review! In all honesty, this poem was amazing. It truly felt professionally written from the great flow you established to the beautiful story you ...

    Aug 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Satire Re: Automotomophobia

    Hey there, Mordax here for a review! So, I was immediately drawn to this poem because I am a sucker for puppet imagery, and you did not disappoint. I loved ...

    Aug 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Waiting

    Hey there, Mordax here for a review! I loved the lonely and desolate feel of these poems. Despite incorporating beautiful imagery and colors into the flowery words, it still has ...

    Aug 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: To the Forest

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review! I love the format of this poem, and it gave me strong folktale vibes which I loved. It was entertaining to read and ...

    Jul 30, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 1, The Awakening

    Hey there! I'm here to start at the beginning... You know me from chap 7 so let's jump right in! There was nothing to worry about as long as her ...

    Jul 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: Signed by A Man Confused.

    Hey there! To be honest, I just stopped by for a quick read and no review but after reading, I loved this poem and had to say something. Oooooh I ...

    Jul 29, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 7, Nightshade

    Hey there! Mordax here for a review. Just a heads up, I have not read any of your previous chapters, so if I misunderstand anything, just ignore me, lol Let's ...

    Jul 28, 2021


I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy