monsterwriter

what a real poem is... a simple masterpiece!

Little Monster here to review! I did not understand this poem. Isn't it morals that if you need to separate a poem then you should put it in stanzas with ...

Hey I'm here to review you. I did not really notice any problems in this poem! I loved it! To begin I will quote the entire poem because it is ...

This poem was excellent! My favourite part: My spirit is trapped. I want to escape and let the world know it can't pin me down. I want to fly free, ...

Hey, don't count this as a review! What I love about this: It has been about a month since the first ‘calling’ to my duty as protector of Druevern. It ...

Hey, I am here to give you a short review. Hope it helps. 1) You entirely fed off of Romeo and Juliet! Apollo and Nyx love each other but can ...

Hey there, this is great. There are a little hiccups that a little editing could fix. Let's look at each one that I can point out: 1.Punctuation I noticed an ...

I have been reviewing all day, typically because it's review day and had only come across one great piece that I fell in love with, it was a short story. ...

What a beautiful calm lovely story. This made me smile. The ending was just what I expected it to be. You described the relationship between the sun and the flower, ...

Hey U hope my review helps! First of all what? What are you trying to say? The poem confused me. By the way I currently have a migrane and this ...

Paper Soul, catchy name. This was very exciting. I hope this is just the beginning of a journey you are going to take us on because this is so interesting. ...

This is great. In the beginning I couldn't understand anything then in the middle part I took it as a mortal mother but then a twist came and it turned ...

This was incredible, this is amazing. Very Good. I have some advice for you however. 1) When a poem is this short and good, it leaves the audience disapointed at ...

This was so long.... a little advise: Separate Chapters by posting them separately, that's how you keep an audience on YWS!

This was interesting. I noticed some stuff that can be fixed when you go back to the drawing board. [list=]When reading this I felt as if I was in a ...