mizz-iceberg

I did not intentionally change the font, when I clicked 'pre' to keep the format the font automatically changed. I've changed it now so I hope it's better. For those ...

Hey I liked this. This was a really cute poem. I liked the way you brought, school, poetry and crushes into one poem. I get what you mean by 'hit ...

I really enjoy you style and I truly hope things get better for you. You an extremely sad depressing life here. I almost cried. Best of luck!

I've been reading you work Jabber, I have to say it's quite fun. I love your poems!! KEEP WRITING!!!!

I liked it! I'm not sure if its a poem or not. And it may read like a journal entry, but I didn't mind. I enjoyed reading it as you ...

Yea I guess it's kind of a character sketch. But I'd like to continue and make this into a long short story. And I want it to be one of ...

I have to agree with BBB, there isn't much i can say about this poem. But its a nice, simple and thought provoking poem. I liked it.

Lovely! Great imagery. Good word usage and overall effective Christmas-y mood! I agree with Cade about the rhetorical questions. See if you can work that out. all-in-all I liked it ...

Oh I loved this!! I also viewed the sketch you made of Pierre. It went along with the description in your story quite well. Stella and Izzy pretty much pointed ...

You really go me at the last line. It was short but it really hit home. I know some people didn't like the ending, But it made me laugh. I ...

I'm sorry if people found trouble reading this poem. I've tried to fix the spacing. What i meant by sort of scattering the words was that Life is not really ...

Great.!! I love how you conveyed the message without using foot long fancy words but in simple short words you expressed the feelings of many writers and people like me ...

Actually i did it unintentionaly...hmm..

beautiful. Great imagery. Yes you could use some puntuation pointer but i'm in a tearing hurry right now. I will however try and get back to ur and leave a ...

Did not catch any mice ;) So hats off!! Loved it. I especially liked your poem because it's very meaningful and deep. -icy,