Published March 11, 2008
Hi,
This has all been moved under my lakegirls account.
-Nicole
Hi,I have a confession to make about my story Diary. It is only based on true events. I had to change a few things around because I was afraid that M was going to come on this and read it or someone from class.
I was protecting myself from my real user name, which is lakegirls. I am lakegirls but also strawberrywine. I was trying to hid my story from a friend but she found out so the jig is up. I have no idea how people are going to react to this or if they will even care.
I know that I should not have created another account just to put this on. I was scared of M though. What she would do if she found that I told so many people what she did.
I wish that you can all forgive me and I will move all this under my lakegirls account.
Also, can I be kicked off the site because of this. I only did it because I was proud of my writing but I was afraid about what M might do to me.
-N, lg*
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I really enjoy you style and I truly hope things get better for you.
You an extremely sad depressing life here. I almost cried. Best of luck!
Again, I'm not going to give you any real critique on this. Because of the nature of it, it's really not appropriate. I really enjoy your style, and were this fiction, I would be hounding you for answers about what happens next. Like I said before, we're here to support each other personally, but just with our writing.
This is so sad and I'm so sorry that you had to live with someone like M. It brings tears to my eyes just thinking about it. 0(o.o)0 (My end of the comment monkey is crying for
you). :
Typo in there. I assume you meant "ho" as "go".
It was good writing. It was deep and I bet many people can relate. Your style of writing is REAL. All in all, I liked it.
Really? That's weird? Maybe we were like twins separated at birth. Lol. I bet your monster isn't as bad as mine.
-steph
Hi,
Oh my god. This story is absolutely amazing. I am a little freaked out though, because I am going through the exact same things. I mean exactly. I can really relate to it. That's what made me enjoy it more. It made me cry when I read it. Watch out for the grammar though.
I am really looking forward to reading more.
Love,
N
p.s. If you ever want to talk about this pm me.
Hey again.
This is, yet again, full of emotion. I almost cried for some reason while I was reading it, and my friend (who is sitting next to me looking at the MTV website) is looking at me like I'm insane. Oh well.
This is deep and full of complex problems. I'm sorry I can't offer a better critique, but you can't really critique a life. You can't help with the plot or the characters, because the plot and the characters are real. If this was fiction, I'd ask you to tone down M's monsterness. But its not, so I'm sorry.
As always, PM me if you have any questions, comments, or just want to talk.