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Re: Land of the Free
I'm from America and i actually like this. It has great emotion and it does frame america. Even thiugh we have a black president doesn't mean we like him. I ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: My love.
I loved it!! At first I found it a little shaking when you mentioned butter and tongue bathing, but it is quite nice. THe last line was amazing, a great ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: A Random Conversation With a Robot.
Is that a real conversation with Cleverbot? I really like it anyway, even if it's not.
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Savior
This was quite great, keep it up!
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: My Crush Ate My Homework
I loved this! It's orignal and very funny. Keep it up!
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 9
I absolutely love this!! The way you show so much amazing emotion, I love it. This is absolutely perfect, don't change a thing.
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Late at Night
I loved the way it was dramatic and dark. It didn't seem scary, but ominous. I absolutely loved the imagery and the feel of it.
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Romeo and Juliet
I liked this poem because it can relate to several time periods and not just Romeo and Juliet.
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: deleted
I liked the truth in this piece, I only recomend that you change the word amigo to friends, otherwise great job.
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: um ... Just don't smear me Ok?
I really love the fairytale quality of this poem. SOme parts are dark, but I like that, it seems real. The ending leaves loose ends, butI still like it. You ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Moment of Silence
I really loved this poem. It has some gramatical mistakes, but otherise i really liked it. Keep up the good work.
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: The Truth
money ain't powerTV ain't fun and love is truly not enough I recomend you change "aint" to the word isn't
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: A Poem For the Girl
I liked the poem, but I agree with everyone on the line that sounds like she is self centered. Otherwise it is pretty good. I don't believe it needs a ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: Roses
Reaching out I cusp one, two in each hand. If you removed two in each hand, the flow would be much better. Otherwise i loved the poem and the natural ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple
I loved this poem! The rhythmic feel of this poem was amazing. The way everything made sense, but didn't. I loved it!!
Feb 9, 2011
