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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Land of the Free

    I'm from America and i actually like this. It has great emotion and it does frame america. Even thiugh we have a black president doesn't mean we like him. I ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My love.

    I loved it!! At first I found it a little shaking when you mentioned butter and tongue bathing, but it is quite nice. THe last line was amazing, a great ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: A Random Conversation With a Robot.

    Is that a real conversation with Cleverbot? I really like it anyway, even if it's not.

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Savior

    This was quite great, keep it up!

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Crush Ate My Homework

    I loved this! It's orignal and very funny. Keep it up!

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 9

    I absolutely love this!! The way you show so much amazing emotion, I love it. This is absolutely perfect, don't change a thing.

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Late at Night

    I loved the way it was dramatic and dark. It didn't seem scary, but ominous. I absolutely loved the imagery and the feel of it.

    Feb 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Romeo and Juliet

    I liked this poem because it can relate to several time periods and not just Romeo and Juliet.

    Feb 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    I liked the truth in this piece, I only recomend that you change the word amigo to friends, otherwise great job.

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: um ... Just don't smear me Ok?

    I really love the fairytale quality of this poem. SOme parts are dark, but I like that, it seems real. The ending leaves loose ends, butI still like it. You ...

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Moment of Silence

    I really loved this poem. It has some gramatical mistakes, but otherise i really liked it. Keep up the good work.

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Truth

    money ain't powerTV ain't fun and love is truly not enough I recomend you change "aint" to the word isn't

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Poem For the Girl

    I liked the poem, but I agree with everyone on the line that sounds like she is self centered. Otherwise it is pretty good. I don't believe it needs a ...

    Feb 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Roses

    Reaching out I cusp one, two in each hand. If you removed two in each hand, the flow would be much better. Otherwise i loved the poem and the natural ...

    Feb 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple

    I loved this poem! The rhythmic feel of this poem was amazing. The way everything made sense, but didn't. I loved it!!

    Feb 9, 2011


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