misstoria

I really liked this. I almost felt guilty reading this because it seemed so real. I also absolutely loved your plan A, so cliché. I can't find any mistakes in ...

I absoultelty adored this piece! It had a really good flow and the imagery worked well. My only thing is that rioty is not a word. Otherwise this was really ...

I really loved this, it was short but conveyed a lot of feeling. Even though the topic is a little overused you used the topic in a diffrent way, which ...

No, it is not, I wrote this one day while I was watching a movie about the berlin wall.

Those would make a good TV show. You could call it "The Bench", thats how much I liked these sketches. Probably;y wasn't any help, but I tried.

I absolutely, positively loved this poem!!! The emotions were spectacular and I loved how it felt like I was reading someones diary. Keep up the amazing work!!

Loved this!!!! The emotion is great and the topic is very easy to relate to. I like the overall flow of this poem, keep up the good work!

Absolutely adored this poem. I really admired the orignality in this piece. I can see the true emotions in this poem, but i can also see the self conflict, which ...

I loved this! The emotion was great, and the countdown was genius! Keep it up!

This was pretty good, I liked the style of writing you used for this. Keep it up!

WOW!!! I loved it!! It was crazy, odd and surprising. This is an amazing piece, I'm glad you would never eat your baby.

Wow! This was really amazing.

Masculine embrace sounds acward, you may what to change that, otherwise wow. You took such a simple subject and made it sound so amazing.

Wow that was amazing!! I loved the line about tying your shoes in all the wrong places. I have never seen such an amzing poet that can make anything work. ...

I really like this. THe emotion seems completly real and stron. I'm only gonna to pick on the live "to everything you've guest". I'm not sure what you mean to ...