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I really enjoyed this - well, maybe 'enjoyed' isn't quite the best way of saying it, but what I mean is I think you managed to get across something here. ...

Hi there CFG, Great to see a poem which celebrates LIFE and is not about glorifying self-harming. I love it for that reason alone. :) However, your poem flows really ...

Hi there, I liked this a lot. I found that if I took time to focus on each line, it worked really well to build up a picture in my ...

I really like this! It has a great beat to it, and I think most of us can relate to it in some degree. You've done a great job of ...

Wow! I just wanted to say - great message! A very strong poem. You make some great points here, it's kind of anthemic in places! I think that your second ...

I think this makes a great poem! It's as if we're going through a kind of healing process with this narrator, and we end up in a really positive way ...

Wow - ultra creepy. I liked the different perspectives here and thought that aspect worked really well to get inside the heads of each character. I think maybe you could ...

I know this man! Well, maybe not this EXACT same hat man, but I have seen his type. And you capture him really well! There is definitely something about these ...

This is really well written and full of thought-provoking facts. I so agree with your final quote too, that the education system should focus on individuals more, be more 'human', ...

Really enjoyed your poem here - hi Deanie! It has a lovely lyrical quality to it. The repeating 'anywhere but here' is wistful and beautiful and I think it ends ...

Hi Kanome! Very sad poem, I think you managed to convey the emotion well here. The repetition of 'no one': No one comes, No one helps, No one comforts is ...

Powerful stuff - quite disturbing and very well written. I like how you built this up and made it seem so alien and crazy, and then your final statement is ...

This is SO Good! I really like the snappy rhythm to it and your rhyming works so well to keep the momentum going. It's a similar message to the one ...

Hi there, I found this an interesting read. I think it's about self-harming, and plenty of self-loathing, and I think you express it really well with lots of good metaphors ...

Wow - great title! I had to read and review just after seeing that alone. :) And the poem is great - I love the verboseness of it, the completely ...