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Hey, Well to be fair this topic is a very overused one. (I've written a poem about masks as well so I would know :)) I like your style, but ...

Hi, I'm Mia and I will be reviewing this today :) Before I begin nitpicking, I love your descriptions and the story in general. Great work :) On to the ...

Hey, Mia here :) Below, my comments are in bold and any added words are underlined. Rose looked out over the destitute land. How long had she lived here? Where ...

Hey, I'm Mia :) Most of the main nitpicks have been pointed out above, so I'll just give you an overall critique. I understood what you were trying to do, ...

Hello! :) I'm Mia. General nitpicks I had another one, once, but I forgot it. I think you should remove the comma before 'once'. Then, the trees and bushes were ...

Heey. Haha I thought this was pretty funny. It was short and humorous and I liked the fact that only two people talked in each skit because I didn't bother ...

Hey! Mia here. :) Grammatical mistakes/ Nitpicks This was it,he thought. Put a space betwen 'it' and the comma. Also, instead of writing 'he thought'. You could write it like ...

Hey I'm Mia. :) The fainting sun was giving its last try to push through the cover of gray clouds, and the wind blew in all directions. I think the ...

Hey, Mia here as requested. :) I took a bite from my bread and turned to nudge the man behind me “Sensei, sensei. Wake up, sensei!” I bellowed, very close ...

Hey! I'm Mia! :D You're my first review as a purp (instructor). xD Grammatical mistakes/ nitpicks The three most popular girls in the school. Replace 'in the' with either 'at' ...

Anna! :D Mia here as requested! Grammatical mistakes/ nitpicks I could only find two! :O I feel as if I've failed you as a reviewer. xD Roxy nodded feebly and ...

Hey Ofir, I'm back for chapter 3. Grammatical mistakes/ nitpicks I landed on my right arm. It hurt, but I didn't have much time to acknowledge the pain. Please don't ...

Hey Olivia, I'm Mia. :) I can't really give this a lengthy review, since it is so short. Words were not his friend and, more often than not, they failed ...

Hey I'm Mia. This is way too small to be a chapter, it's not even really long enough to be a short story, it's only two paragraphs! :S On to ...

Hey, I'm back! Sorry this took so long. :oops: Grammatical mistakes/ nitpicks I ducked as soon as I heard the crash. I squinted, listening carefully to the explosion, trying to ...