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Re: Delete
hey there, before i review the poem i want to tell you that a nice time pass you chose. time really flies when you are with words. hope you get ...
Sep 26, 2014 -
Re: Loneliness
hey there! good work! i simply loved it the way you told out the most complex part of life. this even increased the importance for our fellows. you really lived ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: Trapped Along the Way
hey there! nice work! i could understand it from the end! sorry to offend you but your poem is quite confusing. what is this "IT" that you are talking about. ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: ................
Hey! Nice work by the way. A short and sweet composition is always adored. The poem was narrative but there are few errors that took away the fun. Firstly you ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: I miss...
wow! that was really overwhelming. i am super impressed by you. this poem really touched my heart. you know for a second i thought this was just my story that ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: Printer
hey! sorry to say but your piece confused me a lot. the only lines where i laughed were - "Are you dying? You bastard." The only thing that i could ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: Poem by me, dog
hey! before going in the details of the poems i want to know what did you think while/before writing the poem. this poem does actually captures the heart. i bet ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: Peter's Poem
hey there stranger. this was shortest "poem" i read! and yet i loved it. it really gives us more think than to read. but honestly speaking i dont think its ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: How do I explain it?
hi! nice work pal! there are few things that i would like bring under your notice - the poem is nice, no doubts about it. but it could have been ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: Why Always Me?
hey this is miley here writing a review ( that may help you ) to begin with it, the poem is short and sweet. and also very simply said. but ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: Poem I just wrote- I love him.
Hey this is MILEY here to write to a little review (I hope it helps you). First some encouraging words – the poem cute and to the point. Also short ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: txting with girlfriend
Good job! I really felt being a part of it. The poem was simple yet so involving. Just like it’s said “simplicity does it best”. But there are a few ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: Mama
One word - AWSOME. Man!!! I really loved it. This poem touched my heart and brought silent tears in my eyes. It also made me realize how much a mother ...
Sep 2, 2014
