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Re: blank
Hi, @mememimer here to review the poem. You have brought out a strong issue with this poem. In today's times, people are so insecure of themselves that they forget the ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: All about vegetarianism.
Hi @MoonIris ! A really good article! There's so much I learn't from it (even though I'm a vegetarian hehe). I actually like the vegetarian lifestyle. It's healthy, plus I ...
Jun 26, 2020 -
Re: Dreamer | A Poem
Hi, welcome to YWS. @mememimer here for the review! First of all, a very beautiful poem you have brought out. Dreams are our escape from the reality, a safe space ...
Jun 26, 2020 -
Re: Recipe for the perfect slice of toast
Hi, I'm here to review the recipe because I'm utterly dissatisfied xD First of all, you have a great sense of humour. I enjoyed each and every step of the ...
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: पहचान औरत की
Hi, I'm your fan now!:D This poem may be short, but there's an immense energy that it gives out, the topic 'Woman' in itself is powerful. A perfectly balanced poem. ...
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: मेरी मां
Hey, yet another fine work of yours! A very beautiful poem. I see you have mixed Hindi and Urdu in your poem. One thing, I get it that you maintained ...
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: कुछ पलों की आज़ादियां
Okay, wow! A fine piece. Loved the beginning of the poem. The starting automatically creates an impact on the readers, which, in this case is, simple and powerful. The starting ...
Jun 5, 2020 -
Re: Fighting Is Optional.
Hi I really like this narrative. There's so much to learn to learn from this essay. One thing that gets me sad is that the character is desperate for love ...
Jun 4, 2020 -
Re: sunshine
Okay, wow! I really the way you choose to see things in others. And even if you are "connected to the weeping willow", you know you have matured and grown ...
Jun 4, 2020 -
Re: Stolen things
Hi, time to review! I could make out the clarity of tone in the poem, that is, pure anguish. There's sadness and anger in the poem that can easily be ...
Jun 4, 2020 -
Re: Soot and Slipper Review
Hi, time to review! First of all, you could have started with a brief introduction of the story as without it, it becomes a bit confusing to the readers who ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: DIVERSIFICATION (A theme reinforced by Covid-19)
Hi, time to review! First thing I want to tell you is that I learned greatly from this article. You have good points to support your arguments and suggestions. The ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: Mystery Box
Hi, time to review! Well written! You brought out a warm message along with a lesson to learn. The course of life you clearly brought out is great; being carefree ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: Waiting for the Sky to Collapse 2.0
Hi, it's review time! I think you definitely improved, as compared to your previous writing. Just like the previous version of the poem, you maintained the use of celestial bodies, ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: I Can't Breathe (Black Lives Matter)
Great piece! I think the world is hypocrite. They give us freedom to speak and express yet they take it away so easily. There's no good left in this world ...
Jun 2, 2020
