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This is beautiful.

Hey garalynn. I definitely got "one way friendships" out of this poem. The emotion that the person in this poem is feeling, at times was overwhelming. I felt as if ...

Hey jaimi. Short and sweet, nothing wrong with that. I thought this was kind of cute, but it was masked with sadness. The girl seems so alone! There is a ...

Hey, averythoughtfulbeing! So, I did like this, however, in parts it seemed a bit too over-descriptive and I find myself getting caught up on words. The third verse was my ...

Hey Razcoon! I really enjoyed this! I can almost imagine it being played on the radio (of course, I don't know the tune). As a song, these lyrics are short ...

Hey Sunshine! First up, I loved it. Self-harm is a topic lots of people avoid but I respect how bold you were in the way in which you approached it. ...

This is a very deep poem. I really enjoyed it and found that I could almost relate to the feeling being expressed in it. You clearly have a lot of ...

I did enjoy this and I could feel the emotion in it, however, as I am a bit of a grammar snob I can't help but find the errors distracting ...

I enjoyed this so much! Although, at first, I wasn't sure what was happening but as it continued to grow and the story of sorts began to build an understanding ...

This really is just... wow. I enjoyed this so much! I could feel the emotion in the words, however, I think that making the verses longer and maybe getting into ...

I really enjoyed this! But I was unsure, like aqua1213 said, whether it is poetry or prose. If this was intended on being a poem changing the layout might help ...