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Hey jaimi.
Short and sweet, nothing wrong with that.
I thought this was kind of cute, but it was masked with sadness.
The girl seems so alone! There is a good use of imagery in this poem that I found easily painted a clear picture in my mind of everything. It might sound REALLY stupid but I turned this poem into a little movie in my head and found myself making me the girl -_- I am so sad sometimes. But anyway, I enjoyed it, thought it was lovely and keep writing!
I think this was a very good poem. The only thing that I can see is that would make it better is putting it in stanzas. Other than that, I enjoyed it and think it was very good! Keep writeing poems. I can see that it is ur talent.