manisha

thanks for the review! I wrote this poem for a project where we had to use a line from a different poem in the start. the line "I wander%u2019d lonely ...

thanks a ton for the review. it greatly helped.

hey! thanks loads! it was really quick type and wanted someone to point out the wrongs. thanks for the review. i will get to editing it right away.

that was something! I definitely liked it, especially the message behind it. I don't seem to get what you mean by the first line. I might be missing something and ...

thanks loads for the badly needed review! i edited it a bit and hope that works.

amazing! truly loved it! Love the philosophy behind it, spreading the message of not giving up. april 1st seems to being giving everyone a very spiritual touch.

a very positive story filtering a universal truth in simple but completely elegant form. I really like the flow. Don’t give up on life Even if life gives up on ...

thanks!

wow, it was .... beautiful. I truly loved it. your language was mesmerising. The innocence of the child has been brought out extremely well. i was so lost in the ...

hey! Nargles dont you worry what others say. Dont give a damn..you have got to keep writing and thats when you will improve. i'll read this chapter when i'v got ...

lol, then definitely a lot has happened after that, afterall Harry Potter woke up!

ahh...the naked truth we all try so very hard to hide.

wow! i wasnt expecting the story to go like the way it did. you narration is simple and i like it that way as it immediately pulls in the reader. ...

thats the best thing i have read in days, months actually. makes me want to keep writing and writing, for me and for you. i know that feeling YWS gives, ...

thank you! i was really worried about the poem...i wanted it to be good enough for any contest.