malinda542

You have so skillfully created this amazing world and society in such a few short words. This is wonderful. The characters are very well developed and I love the whole ...

Well this is beautifully written and illustrated. I just envisioned this silhouette of a man roaming the cobble stoned streets of a little Italian village (I honestly have no idea ...

This was fun and playful and I really enjoyed this. It really read like a stream of consciousness thing (I'm assuming it probably was.) I love how you invoked Van ...

Wow, when I first clicked on this poem I wasn't quite sure what I was going to get. However you went in a completely different direction than I would have ...

I feel slightly biased because I'm a huge Whovian! Like beyond big and annoying to anyone that doesn't like Doctor Who. So Let's begin. Excellent poem, it's truly beautiful and ...

I love the message you are trying to send here and you've got some really wonderful word choice going on. I love how you draw people in with the first ...

I love what you were trying to achieve with this poem. The title intrigues me and the concept is very good. However I do have some issues with word choice. ...

I love this poem, The overall theme and message is wonderful, I love the metaphor at the end. "To paraphrase, somewhere between a wireless device and an absent connection". I ...

Well, I do love this idea, sharing both the enemy and the hero's perspective of a battle between good and evil, and Lucius's idea of "good" makes the line between ...

I really enjoyed the rhyming that was going on in the beginning of the poem, I wish you would have kept going with that throughout the poem. I enjoy the ...

I love the beginning of your poem! It has amazing depth and passion and this rhythm that propelled the poem forward. I love the line; "Should I crumble at your ...

First of all well done! This is a beautiful poem! I found myself holding my breath as I read your words. First of all, your word choice is perfect for ...

The poetic nature of the last half of the poem was brilliant. Your word choice was inspiring and I love all of the possibilities you thought of from an old ...

I love the flow of this and the sing-song quality of the poem. You have managed to take a topic that has in my mind become cliché and kind of ...

The rhythm in this is beautiful, it gives this a musical like quality that really brings the poem to life. The imagery in this is just wonderful, I can just ...