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This is a nice poem. I really like the imagery and emotion you portray. What is tomorrow without your love? Some wounds that would not heal Ripped off my body ...

Wow, I like this alot. I opened it to read it because the title drew me in (I took dance classes for 9 years). I was truly impressed by your ...

I like this poem. It is full of vivid imagery and emotion. that danced so preciously with the gift of life from before the wakeful eyes I think adding "the" ...

I like this poem. Change is such an important idea that applies to all of life and I think you wrote about the subject well. The only thing I found ...

I love this poem; it's sweet and elegant. Your use of imagery and metaphors is amazing. The true nature of a star Is to give hope, isn’t it? The shine ...

I like this poem. It is dramatic and gripping. Replacement: un-satisfaction Regret, Disgust Lingering, Wallowing Waiting for it to ware off "un-satisfaction" should be "unsatisfaction" with no dash. A

Wow, this piece is amazing! You conveyed the emotion in a very compelling way that kept me reading. And I love the way you formatted it as a letter with ...

Nice poem. I like the idea you convey of having an imaginary friend as an escape to the boredom of life. Although I don't actually know you, your perfect in ...

This is an interesting poem and I rather like it. However, I didn't understand the beginning or its connection to the rest of the poem. Masks are facades; Lies used ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. :D It's eloquent and full of great imagery. I especially love the idea you convey. The title summarizes it, but the poem describes it ...

This is a very nice poem. I like the vivid imagery and emotion you portray. I wait in there every hour, every minute, every day. Wait with me every hour, ...

I really like this poem alot. It's a good length because it tells you enough but you don't drag it out. I was there when her beautiful dark brown eyes ...

Wow! I like your poem a lot. If you think of the future like a broken piece Waiting to be fixed With time against many a life The enchantment of ...

Wow what a unique story! It was interesting and kept my attention. You did a great job of portraying the innocence and confusion of the narrator as she wondered in ...

Wow this is really good. It's very serious and somber, but well worded. Dearly Beloved We are gathered here Today To remember those who so bravely fought. Take out the ...