Nice poem. I like the idea you convey of having an imaginary friend as an escape to the boredom of life.
Although I don't actually know you,
your perfect in my dreams.
Although I've never really met you,
I've had dreams aplenty.
I have to agree with Roon on this. It is really repetitive. Try thinking of something else to say in the last 2 lines.
I've yet to know your personality,
it's a mystery to me.
So I keep my fingers crossed,
that your loving, kind, and sweet.
I love this!
I'm not saying reality is a bore,
but it's good to have an escape.
When life becomes to difficult,
hind in a life that's simply fake.
It should be "When life becomes too difficult". Did you mean to say "hide"? Hind is not a verb.
It's where I would true,
love and affection.
I didn't understand what you were trying to say here. The sentence structure didn't make sense.
Overall, it's a good poem and I enjoyed reading it. All it needs is these quick fixes.
Points: 1375
Reviews: 20
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