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Re: Hello
Hey, Luke here for a review! Thanks for the follow, by the way. So, this was a nice enough poem. There were pretty words, and they were arranged into pretty ...
Jan 14, 2019 -
Re: Festival Thoughts
Hey, Luke here for an apparently long overdue review! So, overall I really enjoyed this poem. It had a kind of Lana del Rey, opening monologue of "Ride" vibe to ...
Dec 14, 2018 -
Re: Queen of Heart
Hey, Luke here for a short review! So, first of all, welcome to YWS! I’m sure you’ll enjoy it here, it’s really great for feedback on literature, and the atmosphere’s ...
Dec 14, 2018 -
Re: 20 Questions
Hey, Luke here for a (hella) short review! I really liked this poem. I assume it’s a child talking to their parent, but I could be wrong. Either way, the ...
Dec 13, 2018 -
Re: Please, Don't Fade Away!
Hey, Luke here for a review! So, I really enjoyed this poem actually. It’s theme was a great one, incredibly relatable, and you really managed to put forth some strong ...
Dec 13, 2018 -
Re: Spring
Oh. My. Days. I don’t think I’ve ever read something that’s had such a profound physical effect on me. I had goosebumps all over, and tears streaming down my cheeks ...
Dec 12, 2018 -
Re: Soul
Hey, Luke here for a review! So, disclaimer, I’m going to be brutally honest in this review. If I offend you, I apologise. This was by no means your best ...
Dec 12, 2018 -
Re: Women, Their Beauty
Hey! Luke here for a review! So, first of all, I love the topic you’ve chosen to discuss here in this poem. It’s incredibly poignant, and, although it shouldn’t be, ...
Dec 11, 2018 -
Re: Fading Night - Or the Shakespearean Monologue of Unrequited Love
Hey! Luke here for a short review. So, I did really enjoy this poem. At first glance, you do have quite a convincing Shakespearean style to the piece, and the ...
Dec 11, 2018 -
Re: Remembrance of the Lost
Hey, it’s Luke here to leave a small review. First of all, I’d just like to say thank you for sharing your story with us. I understand it can be ...
Dec 10, 2018 -
Re: Birds
Hey, Luke here just to give a little review. Hope you're feeling okay. I really loved the emotion in this poem, and because it's emotional I dont want to give ...
Dec 10, 2018 -
Re: I called her mother
Hey! Luke here to review! So, first of all, I'm really sorry if this is your personal story right now. There are times I can relate, but more with my ...
Dec 10, 2018 -
Re: Colors
Hey, it's Luke here! It's been a long while since my last review, so this might be a little crappy, and I apologise if so. But, nonetheless... I really love ...
Dec 10, 2018
