lordgluzman

Hola again! I read this song twice and I really liked it although I would like for some more rhymes but that is okay. The only thing I think you ...

y first comment is too short. But I did like everything else, theme, plot, emotions and other stuff. I think this poem was great beginning but only a great beginning. ...

I cant believe I am the first one to comment on this. This poem is like the best, you had everything in it what a good poem would need. 1) ...

I don't know......hmm..... Okay I will tell you these 1) It was good and smart. 2) It did not like the fact that there was no rhyming. 3) It sounds ...

I really liked this song. This song shows the darkness of the fairy tales, and it is a pretty sad, painful love song. Matter of fact I imagined it more ...

Hola, Buenos dies senioreta Quezada. I think that this song was okay if it is you first time and as you said you don't habla English that good. I am ...

I will give it a 9/10! If you are asking why not ten my answer is that: Some parts were a little bit forced. __________________________________ In the discos they danced ...

okay that was pretty good! I like the emotions you expressed out to the readers, the best paragraph was: _________________________________________ Just around the corner!- yet miles away, "Here's a te

This is the second time I read the poem! I have finally got the point! LOL! So stupid of me that I didn't get in the first time. I actually ...

First of all I wanted to say that I am proud because you listen to Mettalica. Second off all I sang you song under the melody of St.Anger. This song ...

I am glad to help you! This was rock n roll, wohooo! I think the only thing you should change is: Never had a friend like you One that is ...

Hey Otto! Commissar Robert at your service. This was great but short! It was only an introduction! It is like watching Star Wars III Until the Part when Anakin Skywalker ...

5 stars! This was so touching and emotional! The words were very beautiful. You can feel the great love you have for your brother. Matter of fact I imagined Avril ...

This is really good! I can't believe that I am only the second person commenting this song, I should be like the millionth person commenting this lyric. This was interesting ...

Excellent song! If I would be you I would name this song: " A Real Friend" or "Whenever you’re lonely". This song was awesome! Matter of fact this song reminds ...