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Re: Hybrid
julia, this chapter was wonderful. I love the theme and plot, and your grammar, punctuation, and spelling was nearly perfect. My only problem was that you put the quotations in ...
Dec 12, 2019 -
Re: Snail mail
This poem was brilliant! How did you come up with such a fun, unique plot? It was amazing,, and I hope you know that. The way you put so much ...
Dec 11, 2019 -
Re: Short Hair
This poem was fantastic! You wrote it very well and showed the person's emotions well. I think short hair can be beautiful, and if people disagree, it shows some things ...
Dec 10, 2019 -
Re: Higher Education
Hello! I have to say, I really enjoyed this poem. First, you formatted this very well. It really shows what you are trying to say well. But, you have to ...
Dec 9, 2019 -
Re: Cat and Boy
Hi! I loved this poem. I love it because it is so unique. You show the cat's attitude very well and how you portrayed what goes on inside an animal's ...
Dec 8, 2019 -
Re: Dear Mom
This poem really touched me. It is interesting, how you put this into words. The rhyming style you used was really incredible, you made it rhyme very well. The thing ...
Dec 7, 2019 -
Re: My Secret Lifeline
Hello! I really loved this poem. It rhymes nearly perfectly, there was one or two mistakes. I loved how realistic this poem was, the narrator's mentality and such. Your grammar, ...
Dec 6, 2019 -
Re: Two Sides
First off I love this poem. I read it and thought, "wow, what aa quality poem". The rhyming was great and the italics made it even better. I loved it. ...
Dec 5, 2019 -
Re: A Wedding after all
Hello! I really enjoyed this script! It was a very good plot, I could tell you put time into that. My only issue was the spelling and grammar. There were ...
Dec 5, 2019 -
Re: Dear Friend
I like it. It is short and sweet, yet you tell all you want to say. My favorite is the last line. "And I'll still call you friend". It shows ...
Dec 5, 2019 -
Re: The Price is Right
I loved the movie "Dead Poet's Society" and I could tell this was the result of it. The last two lines: "Freedom comes with a price, But so does life." ...
Dec 5, 2019 -
Re: My Heart is Not a Game
I Enjoyed this poem a lot. I have never been in a relationship, but I can imagine how tough it can be, falling for an asshole. This is the first ...
Dec 5, 2019 -
Re: Chaotically Saving
I loved this poem a lot. I get writer's block often, and I enjoyed seeing my pain put into words. At least that's what I got out of this. You ...
Dec 4, 2019 -
Re: Love You Three Thousand
Hello! I loved your poem. This poem has the same plot as many others, person falls for their best friend, but you made it so simple and easy to read. ...
Dec 3, 2019 -
Re: I Am a Ghost
This was fantastic! It was so interesting, seeing how time would pass as a ghost. How time passes and we seem to ruin perfectly good buildings with modern designs. Not ...
Dec 2, 2019
