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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Hybrid

    julia, this chapter was wonderful. I love the theme and plot, and your grammar, punctuation, and spelling was nearly perfect. My only problem was that you put the quotations in ...

    Dec 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Snail mail

    This poem was brilliant! How did you come up with such a fun, unique plot? It was amazing,, and I hope you know that. The way you put so much ...

    Dec 11, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Short Hair

    This poem was fantastic! You wrote it very well and showed the person's emotions well. I think short hair can be beautiful, and if people disagree, it shows some things ...

    Dec 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Science, Dramatic Re: Higher Education

    Hello! I have to say, I really enjoyed this poem. First, you formatted this very well. It really shows what you are trying to say well. But, you have to ...

    Dec 9, 2019
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: Cat and Boy

    Hi! I loved this poem. I love it because it is so unique. You show the cat's attitude very well and how you portrayed what goes on inside an animal's ...

    Dec 8, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Mom

    This poem really touched me. It is interesting, how you put this into words. The rhyming style you used was really incredible, you made it rhyme very well. The thing ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Secret Lifeline

    Hello! I really loved this poem. It rhymes nearly perfectly, there was one or two mistakes. I loved how realistic this poem was, the narrator's mentality and such. Your grammar, ...

    Dec 6, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Two Sides

    First off I love this poem. I read it and thought, "wow, what aa quality poem". The rhyming was great and the italics made it even better. I loved it. ...

    Dec 5, 2019
  • Script » Dramatic, Theatre Re: A Wedding after all

    Hello! I really enjoyed this script! It was a very good plot, I could tell you put time into that. My only issue was the spelling and grammar. There were ...

    Dec 5, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Friend

    I like it. It is short and sweet, yet you tell all you want to say. My favorite is the last line. "And I'll still call you friend". It shows ...

    Dec 5, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Price is Right

    I loved the movie "Dead Poet's Society" and I could tell this was the result of it. The last two lines: "Freedom comes with a price, But so does life." ...

    Dec 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: My Heart is Not a Game

    I Enjoyed this poem a lot. I have never been in a relationship, but I can imagine how tough it can be, falling for an asshole. This is the first ...

    Dec 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Chaotically Saving

    I loved this poem a lot. I get writer's block often, and I enjoyed seeing my pain put into words. At least that's what I got out of this. You ...

    Dec 4, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Love You Three Thousand

    Hello! I loved your poem. This poem has the same plot as many others, person falls for their best friend, but you made it so simple and easy to read. ...

    Dec 3, 2019
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: I Am a Ghost

    This was fantastic! It was so interesting, seeing how time would pass as a ghost. How time passes and we seem to ruin perfectly good buildings with modern designs. Not ...

    Dec 2, 2019


Saying Why-Double-you-Ehs is inversely like saying Ah-beh-Seh (Abc)... just say yewis it's cooler.
— Anonymous